|Reviews for A MOTHER F'ING SURPRISE DON'T ASK QUESTIONS|
| Homuhomuluv chapter 1 . 3/5
"Leon makes a noise like a prepubescent girl"- best line ever!
| PaloozaChu chapter 1 . 1/29
Was about to be the best B-day ever.
"I found a rotten dead body during our trial :)"
*Everybody SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSCCCCCCCCCCCRRREEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAMMMMMMSSSSSS or gasps or cries or whatever*
| TheImperfectDarkOne chapter 1 . 1/4
And it was the best birthday party of all time. AND THEN THEY ALL MADE BABIES TEH END!
All joking aside, I quite liked this ending. It made me laugh a lot.
| Kuradora chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
Horrible, horrible, horrible.
Horribly funny! That twist was well-executed, sir/madam! Such wonderful dark humour!
| Snakewings chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
"Kyouko gasps so hard that her hair flutters outwards" Hahahaha
| Princess Rozeria chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
Pffffhahahahahaha this was so funny! Good work! X""D
| Spiritedawayinamovingcastle chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
This was honestly THE BEST! :D
Great idea and great writing, everyone was perfectly in character. LOVED the plot twists!
| Goom Gramping chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
Absolutely hysterical and well written! My one complaint is that you referred to everyone as their first name, and that confused me immensely, as Naegi is only referred to as by his last name, and seeing him called Makoto was really, really weird, and I had to think for a moment before figuring out it was Naegi. Same with Kirigiri, Maizono, Hagakure, Togami, etc. The only people that first-name usage would not be confusing would be Leon, Chihiro, Aoi Mondo and Sakura, because those names are commonly used in the fandom.
| Great Musashi chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Kuuuuuuuuso, someone is never able to have a break. You made it more despair inducing than every other fanfic here.
| Shuck chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
That was an incredibly fun read. Beautiful prose and the characterisation was spot on. The little morbid twist at the end was perfect, and really kept with Junko's character. I really enjoyed this, great work!
| Alei-lei chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHHSAHBASHDBHASBHJZSVHJASBGCV SJ zsvj
love you so much.
| MarzBunni chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
Augh this makes me so angry. Like, I mean, it's good and a cool idea and well written but convincing people that they're gonna die and their friends are dead... It's really upsetting. Thank you for writing this but aaaaaaah
| LeonPianta chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
Oh my god. Is all I have to say. This was really well written, and the ending especially is perfect for the situation. However I won't argue with everyone else being alive :p
My favorite line is : "As usual, Syo is laughing, and as usual, it is completely inappropriate. " This whole story is really amusing. Thanks for it. -Don
| the unsung songstress chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
HAHAHHAAH, oh my god this is fantastic. I love how your splendid choice of words did nothing but to enhance the hilarity of the situation. I love how you characterised everyone; the reactions of the survivors (and all of them at the end) were priceless.
[ "I found a rotten dead body during our trial. :)" ] - million-dollar line, cher dieu.
Thank you for writing this. :)
| SyberiaWinx chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Ha ha. A very fitting story. Good idea.