This is refreshing and fun. Keep it up!

great chapter! nothing like a good night quickie! thanx for sharing, beth.

Damn this is good! More please! Yes, definitely more...soon.

Wow, this is rapidly becoming one of my favorite stories out there right now. So incredibly sexy and astonishingly intimate, despite the fact that they're not yet talking about feelings or a relationship. Bravo you!

Oh..these two are headed down a rocky road...enjoying a lot though

Hey, I thought this fic was about Jane and Maura getting into "bed" together! Of course the car scene was kind of hot. I like Jane and Maura doing their impersonation of a couple of randy teenagers ;-)

Oh man this is glorious stuff. I know it's not gonna happen in the story but once they eventually get together (I assume) you should do a spin-off flashback from Angela's POV catching this out the guesthouse window.

cute and so hot please more

For not-yet-a-relationship, they're having an awful lot of fun... Thanks for the update.

This chapter was another triumph Turtle, Maura and Jane in the car was awesome. It was really sexy. I only have one complaint...

More! Can the chapters be a little longer please? I know I am so demanding of you T, but I'd love more on what they are thinking - more brain / internal monologues e.t.c.

It IS very sexy that a lot of that is unspoken (unwritten) but I'm not reading much of Jane's ideas (acted upon or not), her mental reactions, emotional motivations & ideas. I am too curious. I would love to read what's going on in that cocky, stubborn, prudish but also very GAY but not-out head of hers. Don't get me wrong, I wanna know all about her belt being loosened and buttons undone, and fingers... well you know... but I've read all your writing and know that you DO write the thoughts going on around and in these moments. Knowing that you generally seem to have an evil-sexy-masterplan when you start a fic, I have to consider this carefully.

I don't know if leaving out a lot of the thought processes is deliberate or not; If it's part of the plan. As I said before, unspoken IS sexy, so I am delightfully intrigued in the idea of this as part of your narrative style for this piece. Intriguing, but not satisfying what I like to call my turtle-sponsored sexy/angsty fic time. I guess I am just a bit greedy when it comes to my Turtle-Time... MOAR! *cough* sorry it just makes me a wee bit crazy... Anyway, ramble over... and Thanks again :)

Turtleback, what an awesome way to start my morning. I woke up to find in my mailbox not only one of your new stories, but two chapters ;). I like this scenario you're taking where Jane and Maura start their relationship even though it's unspoken. As always, your potrayal of the characters ring true, as I've always seen Maura as more open with her sexuality and Jane more reserved. Looking forward to see where you take this one.

Hot, hot, hot! You're amazing! I cannot wait for more... Thank you!

No romantic declaration for a while... ok. I suppose this will be like an exploration trip.

ual amazing!

Oh, that was really Sexy and aso HOT! I like it!
Improvising or compromising! The best!