[You know that I think of Maura like another daughter. I want you both to be happy. If you make each other happy, who am I to judge? But hiding and sneaking around isn't the way to treat someone you care about."]

I loved their dialogue.

Reading this chapter I felt that 'I love you' coming. Jane stopped her before actually saying it but I knew it was coming. Ugh your a Genius. I loved the dialogue between them in this one. Jane wanting to stay in that bubble awww.

["I want to give you an orgasm while you're still inside me."]

Holy shit tge shit these women be saying.

["No one makes me feel as good as you do," she said.]

Maura your 'love' is showing.

["You are. You're tough and strong... and beautiful. You're... perfect."]

AWW Maura.

["Do you think that was badass?" Maura asked. Jane laughed before replying, "Yeah, that was pretty badass."]

VERY BAD ASS. I loved that you used these canon quotes for this moment. Another great chapter. Ugh enjoyed it.

["Okay, the thing is, I'm not interested in seeing any...other...people right now. Just you." "Because you could be with anyone and-" Maura shook her head and interrupted with, "But I want you, Jane."]

Awww I cant.

I'm glad Frankie knows. And now the girls finally admit that they are seeing each other.

Cuddling and it gets intimate but then Jane spoons Maura and I cant.

["Saturday night I am attending a charity event and I have two tickets. Would you like to come with me?" "Like as your date?" Jane asked. "Or as my friend. Whatever you want to call it."]

It begins. Slowly but it's beginning. Love the slow burners.

[Jane, without thinking about it stopped to bend down and kiss Maura's lips and said, "Of course," before leaving.]

Yup love these little details.

Maura feeling Jelly cause Jane had danced with some friend of hers.

[ "I don't have a type." "So when you said I wasn't your type?" "I wasn't technically lying," Maura said with a grin.]

The best explanation for this whole 'your not my type' thing.

["Everyone at that party had their eyes on you." Maura rested her hands on Jane's shoulders. "Including you?" "Including me,"]

This story is so hot and so natural! I can so see this happening to them. It's really realistic.

["I was thinking about what you said while I showered. I like having sex with you too. I, um, I like...I like how I feel with you," Jane finished quietly.]

Omg these girls are already feeling some feels.

["Was that a first for you?" Jane laughed before saying, "Yes." "Mmmm, it was amazing,"]

I love to read the first. Always great to read.

[Maura's free hand roamed over Jane's neck and chest. "I like how I feel with you too," she said.]

The Emotions is showing. I love it.

[Jane took a moment and then straightened her back and raised the gun and fired five times, hitting the target in a cluster around the center and then set the gun down. She turned around to see Maura watching her biting her bottom lip.]

I envy Maura lol looking at Det. Sexy McBadAss being a bad ass UNF.

["And I told myself I should keep my hands off of you. But somehow you keep getting me into this position." Jane moved her mouth to just below Maura's ear as she slid the hand on Maura's stomach lower. "Tell me to stop." Maura held Jane's gaze in the mirror. "No, don't stop."]

Asdfghjkl.

["Do I make you this wet?" she whispered in Maura's ear. "You have no idea what you do to me, Jane." Jane's other hand slipped "Hey, look at me," Jane said. Maura reopened her eyes. "Look at me." Maura nodded ]

Omg. I cant with all this. I seriously love this story. I know you warned that this story is not much of a plot but just some great sexy times. But the plot you have going on kills me. It is slowly not becoming just sex for these two. You write them so well i can actually see this all happen. And you write the sexy times so very Steamy.

[ between her legs, there was something about the way Maura had climbed onto her lap in the car that was so unbelievably erotic and Jane couldn't get it out of her mind since.]

I'm glad Jane is also thinking about Maura.

Jane and Maura masturbating to each other was very sexy to read.

This is so Sexy and hot but stressful and sad. Oh Oh Maura is feeling already differently. I loved that she was thinking when Jane said "Your so Beautiful" to her. They actually spend the night. Oh oh.

[Maura kissed Jane again before leaning back. She smiled shyly at Jane. She had never been shy about sex, giving and taking pleasure when she wanted. But something about this moment with Jane, immediately after, both times now, felt different. She felt so exposed in a way she wasn't used to. "Do you want...?" she started to ask but trailed off.]

Maura shy. Hmm we will see changes.

Sex in Jane's Car. Ugh this was so fukin Sexy.

["Maura, you could get anyone you wanted," Jane said seriously. "Anyone?" Maura asked, eyebrows raised. "Yeah," Jane said softly. "I was thinking," Maura said as quietly as could and still be heard, "that we could help each other out. We both have the same need. What if tonight I wanted you?"]

Oh yeah it begins.

Very much enjoyed this story. On to reading some of your others. I like your style.

Smut feast..love it

I loved this! Just enough plot to keep it making sense as a story, but the smut was awesome! So well written; I could really imagine it. Very hot! Thanks for writing!

This fic was amazing!
Thank you for sharing!