Eh… i dont like nice harry…

Seems like you had Harry save Jo earlier for nothing. I actually thought there was a purpose and was genuinely looking forward to seeing how her character would play out.

U BETTER NOT KILL OFF JESSE OR HIS MOM BC OF THIS DECISION OR I'LL FUCKIN RIOT!

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"Harry hadn't struck him as the self sacrificing type." Hahaha. :)
Enjoying it a lot so far.

Look I like this story but most of the comments are right
Harry's supposed to be powerful but always had something bad happening to him, it just makes me not want to read more when a character is supposed to be like this and just ends up being either weaker or just never gets there
Usually I'd read the whole thing to go over it more and see if they turn out how you've said they're supposed to be but I honestly don't feel like much is gonna change

good story

I'm not 100% sure, but did you give Harry the demon's lines in this? Before said demon showed up in this chapter, that is? Why are you not letting Harry CHANGE anything? You're just giving him random lines and not really mixing anything up. Will changes actually happen eventually, or is this going to be canon with added super powered Harry Potter in the mix, but he doesn't really affect anything?

Calling Harry "a tinge more aggressive" here is an understatement. Harry is an absolutely useless dickhead! When will he actually become pertinent to the story?

How much time is supposed to have passed between canon HP and THIS Harry, because he's coming across as a seriously jaded and world weary DICK of EPIC proportions here. VERY unlikeable.

Well that was fun

harry is too weak!

Out of everything why would you revive FUCKING Bella, if she betrays them I might get an aneurysm from the stupidity of the situation. At this pase I imagine harry is also trusting Crowley. Hahaha

If you killed Jo but revive FUCKING Bela I might just try to kill you mate

I DON'T FUCKING GET IT. You can't keep pulling this bullshit up. You say again and again how he has extreme power and any other bullshit you come up with but he has shown nothing of this power. The only "power" he's shown is transporting Angels. His magic is useless against the power of plot convinience, every fucking asshole in the planet has powers that block his teleportation, Harry has a hard on to getting hurt because he has an almost unstoppable compulsion to never defend himself, he's supposed to have more power or equal power as Lucifer yet still he gets fucked by every inconvenience you can come up with.
I am fine with a weak or normal character but I hate when you try to hype a character that simply cannot fill expectation. If you just make him a strong wizard that's fine, a weak wizard, that's fine, a angel or archangel level wizard that's fucking fine but don't come with the overpower bullshit to then have him eat SHIT Everytime anything new shows up.