|Reviews for What Would You Do?|
| Just Crucio It chapter 3 . 2/25
This was a very good story. I did notice however that the 1st and 3rd chapters started in past tense and the 2nd chapter started in present and then you sortof change back and forth between past and present. And there were a couple sentences were youd write stuff like "why had this little heart to heart happening" when it shouldve been was orhad happened.
Other than that, the story story was very well written and overall lovely.
| Allora Gale chapter 3 . 2/22
| kitkatthecat chapter 3 . 11/29/2013
I think this is amazing and so heartbreaking. You managed to get their characters spot on.
| Spencer chapter 3 . 11/24/2013
Lovely, so so sweet and sad. Made me cry, but also made me happy that they had each other, and Percy
| xxchibinessxx chapter 3 . 8/24/2013
Oh gosh... this was just... waow! Wonderful! Gahh my hears breaking a little after every perspective ...
| TiffBaby101 chapter 3 . 8/23/2013
oh my god. I think i teared up. that was so sad
| kie-chan214 chapter 3 . 8/1/2013
Oh my god, i love it...
Please i need more
| ElvisRose chapter 3 . 7/11/2013
That was amazing! And absolutely heartbreaking. I loved the fact that there was a third person, and that it was Percival. Made me cry so much!
| RizzyOcean chapter 3 . 6/24/2013
You made me cry. I didn't even notice until the tears were running down my face. Excellent writing, nothing else can make you cry for people that you do not know.
| Starlit Skyline chapter 2 . 5/26/2013
The way you describe the emotions is brilliant, your work is easy to understand and your sentences flow well.
You really captured how much distress, hurt and inner turmoil both Merlin and Mordred were experiencing, especially in Merlin's part of the dialogue, it's obvious in the way he speaks how overwhelmed he is.
This was an amazing piece of work!
| Midnight Kismesis chapter 3 . 4/20/2013
I'm bawling right now surrounded by tissues. My babies, my poor babies...
Great work, I like your style.
| Peaceful Dragon Rose chapter 3 . 4/15/2013
| foxgirl98 chapter 3 . 3/2/2013
i cant stop crying this story is heatbreaking
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/1/2013
I think this story broke me.
| Caella chapter 3 . 2/24/2013
It's so beautiful!