Reviews for Rising Shadow--Now Under Rewrite
Guest chapter 1 . 3/9
This is so far awesome. Please look for the first story from a writer named TalianaMandell in about five months.
YamiLuna chapter 2 . 4/25/2014
!Please continue writing this story!
I want to know what happens!
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YamiLuna chapter 1 . 4/25/2014
!Please continue writing this story!
I want to know what happens!
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YamiLuna chapter 3 . 2/10/2014
!Please continue writing this story!
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CrimsonStrawberry17 chapter 3 . 2/5/2014
Great job on this story. I like it a lot.
Kineil D. Wicks chapter 3 . 2/5/2014
Very nice. I like the Dragonriders of Pern approach, and I have some suspicions on who the rival nation was (but I'll just wonder for now).
I look forward to the next chapter! :)
Bright Eyes Illusionist chapter 3 . 2/4/2014
This looks really interesting. I hope you continue it soon.

I like your writing style. It's clean and easy to follow. You've caught my attention and kept it through these first chapters. I'm quite intrigued as to what will happen.
WhiteNaomi chapter 2 . 5/22/2013
nice
Ac123 chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
Very funny and yet very good! Keep up the good work!
Darkminx chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
This i idea sounds pretty cool, makes me curious to what else you've written. Hope that next chapter is longer, even though i know that this is just the prologue.

On a side note: Go team Bakura kick Atemu's ass!
Mukuro234 chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
I love this. It's very interesting