Reviews for Thank You, Goku
Death101- Fox Version chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
Aw. This was cute especially with the present tense. I don't think the story would have been as nice in past tense. Anyways, nicely done. My only comment for improvement is this little bit:
"food and all - they both laugh at this - I appreciate"
I think rather than the dashes, you should still use the quotation marks to show that they aren't saying "they both laugh at this".
Anyways, nicely done!
-d101
Just a reader1 chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
I sooo love it!
Mysterious Anon chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
lovely oneshot :)
Rozelia chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
Awwwww! How cute! I'm a fan of them...I think they REAALY make a cute couple.
Windy50 chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
I love it! How do you write like this...
Riz-sama chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
Great Chapter. I love this couple a lot and would love to read more stories dealing with this couple :)
Nura20 chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
So sweet.
Mew57 chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Well..cute and short, like your style :)
Charismatic Beauty chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
aw that was so sweet! And poor goku he has no clue what he is getting himself into. lol
Individual Lies chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
Short and sweet. Very well written and very nice.
Captain Momo chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
This was really sweet, I loved it!
Son Goshen chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
I love it! :) It was pretty cute, especially Chi-Chi's words to Goku.
Alexa Hiwatari chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
It was really cute n.n
Chiba Bunny chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
Awww so sweet :) I really missed reading Goku-ChiChi stuff like this :)