|Reviews for Falling in Snow|
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/16/2013
Love it more more more more more more
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/24/2013
Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee write more xxxxxx
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/20/2013
but North, the Guardian of wonder, not hope. hope is bunny but that's ok i know that people get confused.
| RoyEdugawa chapter 3 . 8/5/2013
Alright so first off, that New Years Spirit? Yeah, super super ugly mean. Like, there was no happy new years there at all, none. Did she even say Happy New Year to anyone? I don't feel like she did, and that should be her duty! I am not making a resolution to her next year. Nope. Bad New Year.
Anyway, her aside... I'm still liking this and you better be working on that fourth chapter. When all that bunny jack stuff happens I'm so skipping paragraphs but yeah, this is nicely done. Oh, and Groundhog is a troll.
| Avatar Aang chapter 3 . 8/3/2013
Looooooove pleaseeeee write more xxx
| KageKoketsu chapter 3 . 8/2/2013
As usual I'm impressed with the overall dialogue between the existing guardians and your OC's. The verbal exchanges between the two parties feel familiar and its aided by the fact that these OCs don't feel forced. That's good work brother, keep it up. As always I'm looking forward to future updates. Don't drop this one.
| HerHiddenSecret chapter 2 . 3/4/2013
D; So no JackRabbit? T-T The sadness. :3 It's good though, definetly. Poor Aster! His precious googies never went out to the children. xD I loved North and Phil's argument, it was cute.
| nolifeandlovingit chapter 2 . 3/4/2013
I love this story! Update please
| MeatWacker123 chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
This story is a very enjoyable read. every aspect of jack was portrayed and then some. Post MOAR PLZ :)))))
| RoyEdugawa chapter 2 . 2/26/2013
Okay, that cliffhanger was mean. You went and got me actually all interested in the story. I'll be waiting for that third chapter...
| ILikeToSneeze chapter 2 . 2/25/2013
Omg what happened?! Please update, this is such a cliffhanger!
| KageKoketsu chapter 2 . 2/24/2013
I find your lack of out of character dialouge disturbing. And the sheer amount of good writing toppled upon the fact that the story seems to be leading up to something that could prove to be rather interesting is absolutely unacceptable. Please, for future refrence, at least try to make your fanfic as largely unappealing as possible because at this rate people might enjoy where this is headed, so please, end this potential fan favorite now before if gets out of hand. I would hate for this one to do good, that would be really bad...
| royedugawa chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
For someone who hasn't written in a long time, you sure did a pretty good job on the detail in this. The flow of words is pretty nice, and I'd like to say I can feel out the characters and their personality pretty well, this was nicely done. Now that being said, knowing where this is going to go... Gurl, you so ghey.
| Prophet chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
Seems interesting enough, what with the characters you introduced behaving as they should according to the film. Keep it up, if you can. I'm eager to see what you do with pitch.
| xXDante-kunXx chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
ah! a cliffy so mean :(, wonder why bunny attacking jack, maybe its payback for trying to freeze things up again lol