Reviews for Spellbound |
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Guest chapter 38 . 10/6/2020 i absolutely love this fic and i’ve had it open on my browser for months! i hope you are doing well and i’m excited for the next update! |
BlueTigerdog chapter 38 . 10/5/2020 So firstly I would like to start by saying this is an absolutely fantastic story. I’m in love with it as honestly it’s not only great in plot and development, but also in writing. I’m not usually a fan of first person writing, but this story has certainly caught me. The plot so far is wonderful and I’m always coming back to this fiction to see if you’ve updated. It’s killing me not knowing what happens next, and can’t wait to see what you have in store for us. Additionally I love the friendships you’ve added into this. I don’t usually see good Cedric and Danny interactions and you’ve done them beautifully. Its honestly a friendship I look forward to reading, and I feel it helps give a certain further depth to Danny’s understanding of the magical world at large— helps humanize it a little more, I feel. It’s also setting up some great emotional weight for later in the story when things get... “intense” let’s say. Thank you again for this story! It’s the highlight of my day whenever it’s updated and I can’t wait for the next chapter! Hoping you are well during this time and thanks for your time! |
emma chapter 15 . 8/27/2020 awwwwwwwwwwwwww |
emma chapter 14 . 8/27/2020 awwwww, thats soooo sweet. |
hallowedgrounds chapter 38 . 8/28/2020 I'm hooked! I can't stop reading! |
Meg Murray1 chapter 1 . 8/8/2020 Ok first thing, love the story. Second, please post soon!:) I've read this story at least three times and I check everyday to see if the story has been updated. I'm going a little crazy just wondering what's going to happen to Danny. Question, if Danny can hear(?)the future, does that mean he has a little bit of a magic? And will the trio eventually figure out Danny's secret? Or someone else? It would be cool if it was Snape. ( He is one of my favorites):) and does Dumbledore already know his secret? |
Ch4os4ever chapter 38 . 7/20/2020 What a wonderful story you wrote! Please keep going! |
SofiPhan29 chapter 38 . 7/16/2020 Gosh, like gosh. I had seen this story around but I hadn't actually clicked on it, and man am I glad I did. I can't believe how many emotions this story made me feel like... I cried and I laughed, because this just has such amazing essence and plot, you write the characters so well and —fuck, like really. Really, it's simply surreal the way this also made fear grasp my core (uwu) when Danny's world was suddenly upside down and he was treated like a creature even, making him even refer to himself like that. Just, made me terrified if I was in his place. So, yeah. Heh, I think I rarely write such long reviews (Yeah, this is long for me.) Anyway, this made me hold up one more day in all the commotion the world is passing thru right now, so thanks. Really : 3 |
WanderingRutabaga chapter 32 . 7/12/2020 Sneaky sneaky! But I love it! :) |
Hidden-Shadow-of-Me chapter 38 . 7/10/2020 Hey! Hope you're doing well with the Covid nonsense. Normally, I'm really hesitant to try stories that have slow updates (like the kettle-judging-pot that I am)- but I am so, SO glad I gave your story a shot. You have so many intriguing concepts to it; if it's not about Harry, it's about Danny. If it's not about Danny, it's about the wizards reacting to 'the Phantom'. If it's not about that, it's about people missing Danny. Or the looming return of the dark Lord. Or Hufflepuff shenanigans. I just love it all! I'm never bored by your writing; and even better, all your ideas are playing out so well! I know this story is likely still a long time coming, but I'm more than happy to join the bandwagon and watch your amazing work unfold. Thank you for taking the time to still work on this fic, and building it into a beautiful masterpiece! |
Hidden-Shadow-of-Me chapter 31 . 7/10/2020 XD I know he's a terrible, terrible man. But now part of me desperately wants to see Vlad find out where his 'little badger' is living and just have a field day with it. Okay, but I've also thought about this for awhile too; technically Danny IS a rare being- only two like him exist in the world. So how much worse would this get if Vlad somehow tracked down Danny, but as Plasmius? All the wizards have their robes in a twist about this sweet (albeit sometimes rude) teen, imagine getting the full rich-and-above-you treatment from a ghost even more powerful? This was such a delightful AU combo, and I'm so glad I found it. Onto the next chapter! |
arksy chapter 4 . 5/25/2020 Okay, the characters here strike me as /very/ OOC. Mostly the “Golden Trio” (for the lack of a better title). For example, since when does Hermione “lie smoothly”? It just gives a very un-Hermione like vibe, especially to McGonagall. Sounds like the film version of Hermione—a Mary Sue. My impression of this Ron is simple: a point-blank “Absolute Moron.” I can practically see the dumb expressions of Rupert Grint begins the dialogue—which kudos to you for good writing—when Ron’s really a quick-witted, loyal, very Gryffindor-ish person; reckless, brave, hair-fine temper. Ron here freaks out over Danny, who’s apparently a demon, which is fine, yes, but it’s handled rather badly. Now Ron’s a cringe-worthy moron, and also worthy of Harry’s uncharacteristic mockery. And about /that/: Harry says something /mockingly/, of all things! Harry does not mock, is not condescending, unless your name’s Malfoy and you’ve just done something terrifically stupid during the traditional visit to Harry’s compartment on the Hogwarts Express. When has he ever mocked Ron, his best friend? Why would he? It’s not in his nature. I’m angry, yes, /angry/ about this blasphemous portrayal of beloved characters. Also, did you say it’d be a mix of the movies and books? I can see that. This is really good and all, but the characters really need some work. Sheesh. |
Minty220 chapter 38 . 5/24/2020 Pretty good stuff. Danny making friends with wizards other than the gang is really refreshing and sweet. Thanks. |
GhostHex chapter 38 . 4/22/2020 It’s only been a few days and I’ve suddenly hit the last available chapter. I’m sticking around because I’ve enjoyed this. |
RandomCitizen chapter 38 . 4/22/2020 Whelp. Communication helps prevent blow ups like that. Well that can be felt with after his tour. |