Reviews for Spellbound
SpartanCommander chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
I do want to say that after encountering ghost's Magic really isn't that much of a strech to anything.

Also if their talking about Danny being half ghost the Wizards are pretty oblivious about muggle events and even stuff that happens with ghost's so I would say that they likely wouldn't know anything about Danny.

I will have to ask why is Danny handing over his licence in his ghost form. (To be honest that's the only way I can picture him being mistaken for a Wizard and I can also picture a confrontation between Danny and a bunch of Wizards to be rather bad for the Wizards. They may think they know everything about magical stuff but compaired to the ghost's they know about they know squat)

I will say that I can picture danny saying to the Wizards, "Why would I need a licence for being a ghost?"

Also wouldn't it make sence if Danny turned intangable and flew through a few walls durring his chase I mean Danny's a ghost knowing his personality and what he does with ghost hunters he just meets he tends to play with then or at least do something that says, "your not very smart are you?" He tends to like rubbing it in some of the really lower grade Ghost Hunteres.

you know i can picture Walker getting into an argument with these wizards about ghost law and jurastiction. KNowing Wizards they would likely groosly underestinate the situation and likely belittle him while saying something about how unimportant Ghost law is. I can imagine Walker's responce to that.

Also if Danny turned intangable that stuff would have probably fallen off.

Also by that point Danny would have likely stopped just running and started to fight back. Danny's more than a match for those Wizards not to mention why didn't Danny be more creative with how he evaded I mean Danny's capable of some very crazy manuvers and evasions. I mean he could phase through the ground then Travel at top speed in a random direction before going up again. That would loose just about anyone Danny could also go intangable and invisible and go through a major fact Danny would have likely took the chase through a buisy road way.

(also from what I can tell a Ghost isn't even considered a magical creature or at least enough to warrent anyone to pay attenchion to it why do that take such a n interest in Danny I mean with something they just pulled it could likely have some political problems especially if Danny get's an idea and brings in Walker as his legal council.)

Also the door is locked? Danny's been in the super hero thing long enough to know that means nothing. If anything the Wizards would severely underestimate him. He mat Ghost Hunters that would blast their way through a door or windows or even a wall to get to him. Danny would know a locked door means nothing so if anything Danny would treat is as a temporary reprieve to move into a more secured place and think of something. Maybe ambush the hunters.

I will also say that I don't care what magic the Wizards have. Even hitting Danny with spells isn't that simple to beat him.
XxXNightcoreQueenXxX chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
i wonder did he turn back to a human?
i bet Hawthorn would go what, and drat he is a minor.
that might be one of the facts that would save his ass, no putting minors to jail, or what ever he wanted to do with Danny.
Azorawing chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
poor poor danny can he ever catch a break... well i hope not too soon or what fun would that be. O well can't wate for the next chapter.
sapphire-eyed cat chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
Can't wait for the next update. I love it.
lmaooooooooo chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
August?! But this is one of the better HP and DP crossovers out there! The only minor mistake I caught was that 'okay' was being written as 'OK'. But amazing job, its really different from what I've read before and it really drew me in! I will wait not so patiently for August!
Rosalietje chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
omg !
favorieted and followed
plz make more
little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
Reid Phantom chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
August? Really? You're going to give us this awesome chapter and major cliffie, then leave us hanging until August!

Anyways... Why didn't Danny try turning human?
DyingHeart chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
You have to, have to, HAVE TO continue this! It's so awesome... I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! please update soon!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
August...must...come...faster! Ah, well...I guess the wait will make the reward that much more awesome. There is nothing that I can see that would be wrong with it. It did frustrate me to no end, however, that Danny is so clueless that he really wouldn't think about going back to his human form to escape the wizards! Which brings up the question, would the purple-spray-stuff cling to Danny even in his human form? Plus, did he even stay as Phantom, since he went unconscious? Great writing, the style totally works. See ya.
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