|Reviews for Luckless|
| sulin0105 chapter 26 . 9/2
I really enjoyed this story. You are a gifted writer, and kept me riveted to the end. I also like that you kept Bella human but made her immortal!
| shannon30033 chapter 26 . 8/31
What a beautiful story!
| shannon30033 chapter 20 . 8/30
God, I love this story.
| Ellachanted chapter 26 . 7/31
Well, this was definitely different. And? I'm really sure the gypsy is long dead by now. So Jake is just wasting his time.
But I liked how it all worked out in the end. I can see why Bella wouldn't have wanted Edward involved if she was planning on burning Felix. If Felix wouldn't have survived, neither would have Edward. But it is hard for him to see that. Whereas Bella just goes on and on.
I almost feel sorry for James. Almost. And Edward should be grateful to James in a way. Without James starting the whole thing, Bella would not have been around for him to meet. :)
| bamagal110 chapter 26 . 5/28
awesome story I really enjoyed reading it and your plot was great..
| FluffyLiz chapter 26 . 5/20
I really enjoyed this story. It was full of adventure, jeopardy and excitement, but also a simple, profound love. Best fic I've read in ages. Thank you.
| reachrathi chapter 26 . 5/18
Loved it! This strong Bella was refreshing and seemed real in this vampire world! Thanx...
| Fleur50 chapter 26 . 4/19
J'ai vraiment adoré cette histoire si originale!
Lu avec Google Translate. French. Montréal, Québec.
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| Fleur50 chapter 22 . 4/19
Wow, quelle imagination!
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