Reviews for History Undone
Dummy Perception chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
Homura... T_T
Arthur091 chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
I've always wondered why its not adressed, so she really is killing herself everytime she traves, huh? Such a harrowing and sad story, and worse as it was for naught in the end...
Skygraze chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
I love the way you portrayed the 'death' of moemura only for her body to be hijacked by Homura's consciousness.

Every time Homura resets the timeline, she's practically killing that timeline's moemura's consciousness ans replacing it with her own. It's something that sadly doesn't get addressed enough in fics.

Other than that, you did a great job setting the mood of the story.
genocidershou chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
Absolutely brilliant. I love this so much. The language, grammar, vocabulary, characterisation...everything was spot on. Really emphasises the depths of sorrow behind Homura's endless struggle to save Madoka. Very well done.