Reviews for Please Dean
Lisanna44 chapter 2 . 6/3/2014
Hi there!
Great work! I love the story cos I can see the plot easily and you used simple words so I don't have to take a dictionary to understand the whole story.
But, there are lots of typo in it and I think u should re-read your story before posting it or have a beta-reader. Anyway, it's still an amazing story and it's really ashame to finish it like this.
Also I want to request a clautrophobic Dean and caring Sammy, please
I hope u read this!
Palimpest chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
You really need a spell check- the large amount of mistakes was distracting. You'd also really benefit from either an online beta or a peer review, your sentences neither flow nor sound pleasing to the ear. Try reading them out loud, and be sure to use punctuation to add the needed emphasis and pauses writing needs.
princeofthefallingangels chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
i really liked it. please keep going
lanteaddicted chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
It was a perfect sized chapter