Reviews for The Happy Red Planet |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hope you return to finish this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, whatever you were on when you wrote this I want some! This was great, with comedy and plot twisting all mixed together. I love it so far. Can't wait to continue. |
![]() ![]() With all honesty, this's the funniest and most bizzare NEG fanfic i've ever read that also managed to become very lighthearted without any kind of gore (aside from the MP Evas, but even then, you didn't make it squicky at all). The fact that you also managed to make everyone more optimistic is also a huge plus since usually, this kind of bizzare NEG made Shinji and/or Rei become a crazy awesome cynical person due to the whole insanity around them, but they actually become a better person here. Tons of kudos for you, man. |
![]() ![]() Maybe I'm wrong, but I have the feeling this story is going to feature a Shinji/Asuka/Kaworu/Rei foursome. It is scary how much sense it makes. Please, continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this! I can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Again, a great chapter. You made a good job on Gendo (though I didn't know of this thing of Adam being able to give psychic powers to Gendo, is it fanon?), in the end Gendo is like Shinji, a man running away from his problems, in fact, he's still like a kid yet. But, he still decided to choose this route in end, waiting to see how Shinji and the others will stop him. Keep going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought the choir was just another signthat this is a crackfic. Funny! |
![]() ![]() I absolutely love your story, it's one of my favourite fanfiction I've read. Your taste in humour and story writing works really nicely together. I usually don't laugh at humour fanfiction but this is actually funny. The characters are spot on and I enjoy the little references you put in once in a while. You also add in serious scenes while maintaining the humour which helps the characters bond/grow. It's impressive. Well, since I don't want this review to be too long, I'll just finish with saying that I really love your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Again, an amazing chapter (I was only able to read today). I liked the friendship between Rei and Asuka, but now let's see what's going to happen with Babyworu, Shinji and Misato. Keep going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this fic a whole lot and while it doesn't have the most serious or realistic plot, the humour really makes up for it. I can't say how much time I have been laughing out loud , especially when it nails down some great truth of NGE, for exemple in this chapter the fact that Ritsuko's predictions of failure NEVER come true XD. (Or the spacetime wrapping power of UCC coffee, never underestimate UCC coffee). It still isn't perfect, of course, and I think one of the main problem of this fanfiction is that compared to the comedy bits, the more serious moments can seem a bit ... weak. Still one of my favorites tho and I really look forward to the next chapter ! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing, I laughed a lot on the references and jokes, and this explains the Sea of Kaworus. Though one detail got my attention: why is Misato of all people a person who knows what a fanfic is? Keep going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() In Super Robot Wars, Kaworu is implied to be looping just as in the show. This didn't come up in the early games with him (F/Final showed nothing, there was nothing that would indicate it in Alpha), but as the games have gone on things have changed (Alpha's DC port had an extra stage with Kaworu alive after the stage you kill him, so... MX had him be not entirely terrible, he actually outright says in Alpha 3 that he's the same one from MX and takes control of Unit 00 during the Third Impact stage, in L he basically cuts the Eva plot off right before Bardiel went down, and in Z3... well, half the game is still missing, but Kaworu's been hinting that he knows shit, which is important because in the Z chronology there's a lot of shit to know) Oddly enough, he's not the only person to be known to have jumped dimensions across games, and he's not even the only one to do so by dying. |
![]() ![]() ...the headless statue of Adam is one of the Rebuild shout-outs, isn't it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Anno and Kojima" This is getting too meta, how deep does the rabbit hole go here? |
![]() ![]() ![]() to Anon64: The statue was healing? Wow, that's certainly an interesting alternative! It might be cool to see somebody try that idea for a fan fic! |