Reviews for Turning the tides of time
TezuSezu chapter 1 . 1/10
please update ... it's interesting enough to keep me from sleeping ... it makes me curious to end ...
Matsukaze Tenma chapter 1 . 12/25/2014
This is truly very interesting to read; please update soon
Sailor Pandabear chapter 1 . 8/26/2014
Zangetsu-Hollow Ichigo chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
This is great i love byaichi stories keep going!
Hotaru Vie Jaegerjaquez chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
I'll look forward for the next chapter XD
Dianne060807 chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
Please continue this! I love byaichi stories so please do not abandon this! :)
kariza2013 chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
i really like it please write more!
psunshine2 chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
Considering this is your first story it was very good. Compared to others i have read you write like a pro.
Stormglass chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
Keep it up this is AMAZING!
Lil Mexican chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
lostanddistracted chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
This is very good. I like the detail that you include and how you are building the relationships between the characters even if we have seen little interaction between them and Ichigo. Only one note, in the author's note you write that your story sucked and that you doubted that anyone would like it. DON'T DO THAT. It makes you sound unsure of your work and can make the readers uncertain of it as well. Have pride in your work. It's really good.
Keep writing. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
Me gustaria que continues con la historia. Gracias :D
Silver Flyer chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
It's pretty a little bit more detail about some things, but you don't have to.
EliRadcliffe chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
This probably is going to sound a little bit... technical or critic to you, but I hope you don't take my review bad. I'm just trying to help you, since you asked for opinion about the story :D

First of all, remove all the "X person POV". There's is no need for them to be in the story at all. The only thing they are doing is making your story look... ugly, to say something. We, the readers, can understand when there's a change in point of view without the autor stating it, so don't worry about that.

(In the first part, there's no need for stating a change in pov because there's a sequence between the first part -Kisuke pov- and the second part).

Try and use some separators, like "***" or "XXX" or whatever tickle your fancy. It will look better and it'll do the job.

The chapter is long, for what I'll will give you lots of browney points because I love long fics. But long fics that aren't filled with lots of dialogs and little narration. Yours is well written and even if it have some similarities to Tango Dancer's ''Sorrowful Tears of the Moon'', yours promise to be a longer storie and to show more about Byakuya and Ichigo's relationship (at least that's what I hope to lol).

I'm really curious to know what is going to happen next. I hope you update soon.

Hugs and kisses for you. And good luck with the story!
Coshaidamarsuntsu chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
I'm liking the story you're setting up here. I'm really interested to see what will happen next, especially what he's going to speak to Byakuya.
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