|Reviews for Dance|
| keep-me-posted chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
She's older now and you still managed to write an entire story without ever mentioning her name, and without it even looking weird. Do you realize how amazing that truly is?
Great story! You wouldn't think you could love a story that doesn't have Calhoun init, but he mentions her enough that it almost feels like she is there.
I think it's amazing how easily I can picture Felix's daughter without a full description or name, but you can. I think the whole part of her trying to keep her balance as she took off her coat and boys was just amazing. Really, the whole story just gave a fuzzy warm feel to her and Felix's relationship, and I just loved it.