Reviews for On Break
Aaronmcglashon chapter 1 . 8/27/2014
I really liked your story, i just thought i would do a quick review:) i thought it was pretty good, i liked how you showed phoenix's inner turmoil while still keeping the story light. I think this story shows a great amount of character, as well it's very well detailed. I like stories like this cause its pre relationship jitters and you did a good job showing the emotions between the two. It wasnt as long as i hoped it would be, btw i hope you do some sort of continuation to this. All in all this made me smile, so thank you:)
Ube chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
That was freaking fracking adorable! ;D Faved!
Victoria-White-Cat chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
Really good!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
That was awesome! At first it seemed a little long, but then I started reading and couldn't stop!Awesome fic! c