Reviews for Life Was Fine Before You
Mad Hatter - J chapter 11 . 11/3/2016
Stayed up so late to finish reading this. I see that you haven't updated in a few years, but I hope you still plan on finishing the story! I need to know what happens!
Mad Hatter - J chapter 4 . 11/3/2016
Omg, I had to review at this point. I was not expecting Archie to walk in on that! I feel so disappointed in Assunta. I really like the relationship developing between her and Archie, and I like the bond between her and Donny, but it caught me so off guard! I'm so glad I started reading thisI can't stop!
MutiaRAWR chapter 11 . 12/14/2013
I get notifications for Mad World updates quite often but tonight I found myself completely forgetting what you've written; to me that's terribly tragic because I've ben religiously following trust in loyalty and it's prequels and Life was fine before you was big favourite of mine. I was also cleaning out my mailbox and I stumbled upon something I had saved and you had told me a little something about the climax of the story and I think I just figured it out. Goodness I have no idea why I didn't see it before, well it was sent in February and since I re-read this chapter right after cleaning my mailbox I think I could finally put two and two together hahaha. So I think I know what will occur and I'd love to read how you've had it mapped out. I hope that you've been well. I miss your stories so much, I miss following the lives of Leyla and Assunta and I certainly miss you! I really hope to read from you soon and I hope that you are well :) xx
NightlyRowenTree chapter 11 . 8/18/2013
Guest chapter 11 . 7/25/2013
Weweeew! Glad you're back! Ooooh Assunta's changing her lifestyleee um question - does archie have a family? Will they be the hiccup? Greatly looking forward to more xxx MutiaRAWR xx
WhatsGoingOn chapter 11 . 7/24/2013
Omg, Donny, you troll, I'll go see the Red Sox game with you, even if I'm a Yankees fan
MutiaRAWR chapter 10 . 7/22/2013
is the next chapter in the works? Really keen to read more xx
WhatsGoingOn chapter 10 . 6/26/2013
Agent007Tomato chapter 9 . 3/11/2013
I'm throughly enjoying this! I adore the little sentimental moments you've for Archie and Assunta. Keep up the good work. Cheers!
Agent007Tomato chapter 2 . 3/10/2013
"Everything you've been through has changed you. You might find yourself wanting something you never thought you did," simple, yet eloquently said. cheers!
MutiaRAWR chapter 8 . 3/5/2013
Aw! Assunta! Aww I wanna give hher a hug :( aww! I! Aw! I ship Assunchie. I'm so scared for what you have in store. I'm scared, but I'm excited. Oh my, I'm really excited. I can't even express all that I want to say. I'm just very happy right now, smiling, happy and. Awww! Ahahhaha awesome chapter, really looking forward to reading more :) xxxxxx
RaeFazer chapter 7 . 2/23/2013
yay, finally a kiss! i love getting updates from this. :)
MutiaRAWR chapter 7 . 2/23/2013
Oh la la! I'm still creating conspiracies about Archie, would he be one to say the wrong woman's name...? I'm lookin' forward to finding out what it is, whatever it is. I wonder what'll happen in the space of time that he's back in England. Well I loved this chapter. Oh. What if the whole, how to lose a guy in ten days kind of things happens? Like Assunta's not ladylike enough for Archie's crowd and he says something, she finds it offensive etc etc. I don't know. I'm excited though hahaha. Keep up the awesome work :) xx
TheDuckOfNom4 chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
I love this so much! Assunta has real spunk and tenacity I just love it! I think you've made a really great contrast in the relationships of the characters and it makes it really interesting! :)
MutiaRAWR chapter 6 . 2/15/2013
That was lovely! I found myself smiling througghout hahhaha. Very nice, very well played haha. Super excited to see what kind of a loop you plan on making us go through, really love the fic, awesome work. Archie is very very charming, and I'm glad we have more insight into why Assunta behaved the way she did, sexually, it gives her a vulnerabilit- oh god. I think. Does she get pregnant? Oh my. I didn't see that coming. Well. Things pop up in my head and that was one of the. Just had to interrupt my train of though -.- ...vulnerability and I think in a way that's an aspect of 'femininity' isn't it? I guess everyone's got a wek spot but for her, she's a little self-conscious isn't she? A little scared or at least cautious when it comes to male attention. I just hope that she doesn't become entirely vulnerable when put in a situation then. I feel like she'd at least try to bluff a little. If she gets raped. That wwould be difficult for her. That is such an attack not only physically invaded but emotionally, really traumatic, she'd be even more wary of a man's motive, she'd probably then cling on to donny more, old comfort etc, but with archie, she might turn to him, I'm just not sure she'd go to him so vulnerable because she's quite invested in him, and because Donny is, well, Donny, she might be more comfortable being so vulnerable and broken in front of him. Again, my mind went on a tangent. Anyway, looking forward to what's next :) loads of love and praise xx
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