Reviews for Trench Coat Edition
Ness fan 01 chapter 1 . 1/4/2016
Well, that made me sad. I do think you portrayed Nick just as he is on the show. I imagine you didn't get a lot of reviews because so many Ness fans, including me, prefer a happy ending. But, you wrote a very good story.
nd4ff chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Very nice - poor Nick. I can't wait to see where this series takes these two and your short was a nice trip down memory lane.
Dee2387 chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
love the way Nick reconciles with himself after giving up the trench coat. it was such a random addition to the episode but I think it really reinforced the idea that it was Nick himself, being deadly serious and without whimsy, acting on his own desires because he wanted to and because he had the confidence to rather than a perceived confidence because he had a comfort 'blanket'.

Anyway great story, hope you continue :-)
mel60 chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Clara Meliza chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
I am so glad that you wrote a realistic side of Nick and Jess in the aftermath of Cooler, in which everything isn't filled with rainbows and unicorns and skipping off into the sunset. I highly doubt Jess will leave Sam because of a (totally hot) kiss between friends, so it was refreshing to read a story that could truly end up on the big screen next Tuesday.