Reviews for All I Wanted
deleteddecember2014 chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
In response to this beautiful work of poetry, I have composed small poem to express my emotions:

wow
no
um
ouch

But this was very good. You captured my attention at the first line, the narrative voice is touching, and it's true to canon.

Your grammar is a bit iffy, but I'll take it that this is free verse? Huh. I've never been one for free verse, but you're making me cry over here, so I think it's okay.

All in all, pretty good.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
This is great, even though I dont like maya.
the-sleepdeprived chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Awe! this was an amazing poem, hope you like the rest of NeverMore!
Anime-LoverGirlPop chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
I agree I mean why did the writer kill her? Max and Maya could've been sisters, twins
miss.anonymous chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
WONDERFUL POEM. I agree, nothing was really Maya's fault...I would hate to be a clone. She at least deserved one good thing in her life. Why couldn't she and Ratchet have fallen in love or something?
Miss Anonymous