|Reviews for Tale of the Setting Sun|
| Archer the Undreamed chapter 17 . 4/15
Love the concept. You know, frankly your Naruto makes more sense to me than the real one. And your character development is top notch, I especially enjoyed seeing more of Fu than a faceless jinchuriki.
| Devin chapter 17 . 4/14
| pain17ification chapter 17 . 4/12
A very well thought out and written story!
I look forward to seeing more and I hope you continue your splendid work!
| pain17ification chapter 2 . 4/12
A good start...
Not gonna lie; this chapter nearly made me shed a few tears...
Reminds me of my childhood in a way...
Sorry... Forget what I said. Good start! *smiles*
| SPark681 chapter 17 . 4/7
Well this story is shaping up to be quite interesting can't wait to see what the next chapter has in store so keep up the great work!
| greymouser chapter 17 . 4/6
I like Mayu and Rai, they're nice and seems to be just what Naruto needs at this time. I don't think he can handle Sakura and Sasuke, they might annoy him to join the dark side. But as emo as Sasuke is, he's ten times as interesting to read about.
| Jouaint chapter 17 . 4/5
| My Hopes and Dreams chapter 17 . 4/5
Plz update for a new chapter and of you do pairings I rather you do someone like Ino or Sakura, I can't stand Hinata because she's to sweet, and we need someone with that spicey after taste to compliment him like with Minato and Kushina.
| Konoha no Kaijin chapter 17 . 4/4
Great story! I look forward to reading more.
| Konoha no Kaijin chapter 4 . 4/3
Very well written, I was ecstatic when I found out that rai is kotetsu's brother. Didb like the symmetry with mayu being izumos sister. I was kind of hoping for a slot for sasuke on team 7. Im not the biggest Sakura fan, but I think sasuke can make an amazing character if you can filter the angst and inferiority complex to manageable levels. Great chapter!
| Konoha no Kaijin chapter 3 . 4/3
I kind of skimmed through this chapter, as it is a really good read. However the only thing I have a hard time getting over is even though he is an extremely talented academy student he is still an academy student. Maybe I am missing it, but in this chapter it seems as if he is getting a lot of information without really showing how he gets access to it. For example, the shadow clone jutsu. While, as you pointed out, it is not a forbidden jutsu as it is, it is still not likely that an academy student would ever get a hold of it, as the creation of one would theoretically kill a normal academy student. I think a good idea would be elaborating on how he gains access to these techniques, both training techniques and technical ones (ie. The wall and water walking technique or his wind style: gale respectively). I like that you arent portraying him as an idiot but on the converse side he is still an academy student. Things like elemental jutsu theory are especially out of his league, how does he know that what shows up on his stomach is a seal when that isn't information he'd be aware of? There is a difference between smarts and omniscience. I think if you can toe that line and strengthen Naruto without overpowering him you will have a truly great story on your hands. I look forward to reading the rest :)
| Grimhound chapter 1 . 3/30
LOVE This 10/10
| Rain-chin chapter 17 . 3/27
Would love to see an updat eof LOTH, but take your time.
| Rain-chin chapter 16 . 3/27
Good! Good! I liked the fact that you contineud with the extraction process.
I disliked the fact that Naruto still wants to be a Konoha shinobi, but f it, good story!
| Sandaime Hokage chapter 17 . 3/27
Really enjoy fics where Naruto is older, looking forward to your next update