come on update really oops

can't wait to see this updated again it's actually one of the most well written Naruto story plus I'm a huge fan of a redhead Naruto

I like the appreciation of Hunter x Hunter.

I do really love how this was created, it's not just a blind copy of Naruto and introduces new characters instead of the normal Sasuke and shit. . . It's very enjoyable and I'm happy that someone like you is actually out there and I'm even more particularly surprised that this was just found on the internet and not actually published yet it is this good. . . I'm surprised that this hasn't gained more people to read it !

I really hope you update soon. It's a excellent story. Well thought out and plotted and it would be a waste if this was to end up just another unfinished epic.

Karin's full name is Karin Uzumaki. Did you know that? I don't think cause you wrote -
Naruto Uzumaki from Konoha, Kabuto Yakushi from Konoha and Karin from Kusagakure.

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Very interesting take on the Naruto series! I thought it was well written, your writing really improves through the story!

It's been months man... Mouths.

Could it be? Have I finally found something else worth reading while diving in the cliché filled storm of bad writing that is usually the naruto fandom?
Jokes aside,you sir/madam have just earned yourself a new reader.

interesting, i look forward to reading more.

Please continue!

ah books :) was a tad disappointed that sasuke didn't advance at the same pace as naruto, but fascinated with the new team 7 nevertheless

:'( oh naruto

Loved it. The whole thing with Akatsuki really got me going. Awaiting an update.