Reviews for Tale of the Setting Sun
Lost Soul1099 chapter 38 . 1/21/2022
I've never reviewed before but this is one of my favorite stories in fanfiction. I hope you will continue and hopefully complete it.
MayaviPanchi chapter 46 . 1/20/2022
Really great story.
Your writing style is awesome.
Poor Naruto!
What will he do, when he sees Mayu return as Pain?
Gift of Light chapter 29 . 1/14/2022
Bro you're an absolutely brilliant writer, I've never really cried reading anything before but you've made me cry twice now!
you shall not know my name chapter 46 . 12/8/2021
such a great story; i hope you can continue it.
and if not: i really enjoyed reading it!
you shall not know my name chapter 27 . 12/6/2021
I really like your oc's! you really make them come to live
ERSU.1 chapter 2 . 11/25/2021
My chest hurts reading this chapter
Kenseals chapter 1 . 11/11/2021
I really hope you finish this masterpiece of a story.
HexusBePerplexus chapter 46 . 11/3/2021
I will happily hold you at gunpoint for the next chapter
MyLifeIsUtterShit chapter 1 . 10/24/2021
:'0 wow, ok that hurt
pathless-sage chapter 46 . 10/20/2021
Update please
Hoosthat chapter 46 . 10/17/2021
It’s always the best fan fictions that are left unfinished. Severely disappointing.
lamthai316 chapter 1 . 10/14/2021
I've never read a naruto fiction where natuto has such a mental problem though I understand you are trying to build his character for what's to come.
Guest chapter 46 . 10/10/2021
This is the best fic i have ever read. Update plz
Guest chapter 4 . 9/11/2021
This chapter was terrible. You fully misunderstood the bell test as well as butchering it, gave genin magical powers that somehow let them surprise an A rank jonin which wouldnt be possible unless they were high chunin level, shadow clones are a forbidden technique that wouldnt have been found in a library, sensing chakra isnt something genin are capable of, naruto sensing 2 types of chakra is nonsensical, narutos personality is borderline illogical and the entire team aspect of the test was ignored. You also failed to realise substitutions are one of the 3 basic academy techniques so naruto mistaking it for a clone is illogical aswell, especially if hes gifted enough to surprise and steal a bell from a jonin. So many mistakes, its hard to read. Grammar is weak at best. Seems to be another OC story. Atleast the grammar isnt terrible, but still cant be asked to read this.
dextron11 chapter 46 . 9/10/2021
This is largely ‘OC the fanfic’. Don’t get me wrong, many of the OCs are passable, but it would be nice to know in the description that we won’t be spending much time with most of the actual Naruto characters.
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