Reviews for Tale of the Setting Sun
WritingRin chapter 17 . 7/22/2020
I have to hand it to you, you’re a deft writer. When you first revealed that the nine tails had come out I tried to think back for any clues. I couldn’t remember any until you revealed it in this chapter—the caretaker’s death. I did get an eerie feeling at the time about that but it never occurred to me that he/kyubi killed it! Love all the background info we’re getting!
WritingRin chapter 16 . 7/22/2020
That was sad and fearful. Glad Naruto realized he only needs to be accepted by some people to start with. I didn’t want him to turn into a monster because of his mistreatment
WritingRin chapter 15 . 7/22/2020
He collected some rent! That is so cheeky. I love it! And I love Mayu because her willingness to accept him is gonna save him... I think. Rai too. Fu too?
WritingRin chapter 14 . 7/22/2020
No mention of kakashi helping him learn that lighting? No reaction from Kakashi that Naruto’s speed looked like Minato’s technique? Not sure if it is the same I just remember his dad had a speed technique
WritingRin chapter 13 . 7/21/2020
I meant to also say I’m happy about Mayu. It’s no way to live” indeed! And Fu is also cool
WritingRin chapter 13 . 7/21/2020
Woah so 9 broke out once and we didn’t know it! Also it’s gratifying to see Kakashi’s emotions break out too. He did care all along!
WritingRin chapter 11 . 7/21/2020
Why is gaara’s hair considered auburn not red? Glad he appeared, hope they still meet. Glad Naruto is pushing past his headaches and realizing...
WritingRin chapter 9 . 7/21/2020
I love that HxH inspired you and that it’s set in Suna. And that Rai gave Naruto this info. I think it’s setting us up that Naruto will soon go red and foxy but guess we’ll have to see
WritingRin chapter 7 . 7/21/2020
Yay! I’m happy with this chapter because they are bonding. That feels good. I also like seeing good aspects of Naruto’s personality. I want to see him fiercely protect his team, the only good things in his life, soon
WritingRin chapter 3 . 7/21/2020
Alright we’ve really switched tracks now! I’m excited. Without Sasuke to focus on, Kakashi will be much more interested in Naruto and this Naruto needs supervision because my god he has been up to some dangerous stuff by himself!
WritingRin chapter 2 . 7/21/2020
I think the part about him becoming hokage jumped the gun—a little part about that added to the first chapter, OR come up with as a way to cope with this breakdown would be good. But I like the part about Iruka and Ichiraku.
WritingRin chapter 1 . 7/21/2020
I love it so far. Great job describing his development. I keep picturing him once he meets Gaara and the extra level of mirroring between them that the red hair will make. When you started talking about the orphanage I also pictured an AU of Naruto as Annie... she was a bit of troublemaker too. Anyway I’m excited to read this story. Here we go!
BlackyMacky chapter 45 . 7/21/2020
That fucker Pain made Mayu into a Path, didn’t he? Smh my head, Naruto is gonna be heated if he finds out.
Guest chapter 16 . 7/21/2020
Why does every fucking fanfic always have naruto lose to ever fucking exam its a joke. His father killed 4 iwa jonin at the age of twelve and you make him like his dad only for him to lose to people way weaker than he should be. This is my main issue with fanfics that try to say he is stronger than cannon for him to only lose to people he would of beat in FUCKING CANNON it makes no god damn sense. Littlery just make him lose becase people dont expect it and you think that makes it a good plot. What a joke
CaptainFlowers-1 chapter 46 . 7/21/2020
Man I am so damn happy to see an update to this amazing story! I wonder what's gonna happen with the Whirlpool, what Naruto's plans are, and how exactly the story is gonna move forward. Man now I wanna reread the whole story!

Keep up the awesome work dude, can't wait for the next chapter!
3,409 | « Prev Page 1 .. 5 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 25 .. Last Next »