I like that you are not making this a naruto ship story or whatever and are just focusing on a good story. I frankly don’t care if he gets with someone or not and that is very rare to see in fanfic now q says…those authors that wrote story like this are so far few in between

I like that you are not making this a naruto ship story or whatever and are just focusing on a good story. I frankly don’t care if he gets with someone or not and that is very rare to see in fanfic now q says…those authors that wrote story like this are so far few in between

Neat.

What delightful characterization. And this is a very pleasant Iruka.

It started pretty good, and then I got sad.

This looks Good.

While I admit that people have heavily criticized Kumo's fall to just Deidara and Kisame, they fail to realize that Nagato's paths were also most likely involved in its fall. There are 6 of them, Deidara's strongest bombs alone are more than enough to disorient anyone. Then you have Kisame moving in with his heavy hitting, and the paths. I'm certain every path other than the Deva Path was involved. Then you have A immobilized. And lots of shinobi and kunoichi might be away on missions.

It's not that unrealistic, but it'd be nice if these points were addressed in the future when Kumo comes up again in chapter 48 and onwards.

Hey, Kenta. Good to see you again. Hope the last couple years have been kind to you, man. I'm glad you picked this one back up, at least for a chapter. Here's to one more?

Terrible.

Crap.

Awesome update. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Are you sure he's like minato? He seems too emotional detached . Besides there is no technical brilliance in his fighting style.

Damn this is one of the best Naruto stories I've read on this site. A totally different and unique perspective on the Naruto world, and nicely written, to boot! I'm hooked man, can't wait for the next chapter. Gonna read this story all the way through, so please keep writing this.

I know I’m kind of late in this and I know I’ve read some chapters and I don’t know where i actually left off but that Menma twist was rather cute lol…same team different sensei. I guess it works to a point lol..I guess by this point he is what? 13-14? .. rather fun story to read. Rather reminds me of one where naruto also graduated early but naruto didn’t get promoted when he took the exam because one of his teammates or sensei got injured or something.. can’t exactly recall but he dislike Sakura and sasuke so.. but interesting twist nevertheless

Did naruto truly killed them or was he set up by danzo?