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Love it

Love this story - great job!

I enjoyed your story! Thank you for sharing.

Really enjoyed reading your story!

Nice story but bad ending. You seem to have decided that it’s time to be done, so you wrapped everything up in about five paragraphs.

Thanks again for this entertaining work

et bien on peut certainement comprendre que Snape n'est pas ton personnage préféré! Quand même un ananas en travers, j'espère au moins que ce n'était pas un Pain de sucre mais un Queen..et encore .
Mdr

This was a very entertaining and wholesome story.

Thank you so much for sharing this with us!

Just wanted to poke at these numbers quick. When we convert all the debt into SS, we have a grand total of 198,065. If we don't count the G that's being charged daily, we're looking at 66,022 hours of work to pay it off. This is all assuming no interest as well. We can divide that in half because there's two of them working it off. So, we're now down to 33,011 hours for each of them. If we assume 10 hour work days, then we're down to 3,302 days of work to pay things off. Again, that's without interest, and without the G a day for the lodging. With the G daily for lodging... The G is 17 SS, so we add 17 a day. Then we subtract 3*10*260 SS a day. That means you're lowering the debt by 43 SS a day. Which puts the pay off days to 4,607 working days. This obviously doesn't count any sick days etc. I imagine goblins wouldn't give holidays off for the prisoners, and this doesn't count interest. But still... Looking at a total of 12 years and a month or two.

I get plotwise why you did it. However, what reasoning is there for those spells to be first cast on Wormtail in his rat form? There was no actual reason given in the chapter. Dumbledor just sort of "could you test this rat because you're standing here?" Why isn't he testing the owls, or cats, etc? It didn't do anything out of the norm to cause suspicion... Just, feels a bit like plot armor.

So wanting to study and encouraging others to study more is apparently emotional abuse. Never heard such bullshit in all my life!

A little utopistic ;-) but fun to read.
Thank you fr sharing.

A wonderful story!

I freaking LOVE this book. Thank you so much author for sharing this. This should have been cannon everything including Harry and Hermione ending up together.