Reviews for Hermione's choice
Slytherin66 chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
This was good I am surprised Albus and the other teachers acted so quickly given Hogwarts has had problems for a long time. Mind you the Headmaster and his plans would be in big trouble should Harry leave Hogwarts or the magical world.

I wonder if Minerva will start acting like a better head of House as she does not help, Neville get his own wand, Harry and his many problems and all the others who might need help.

I am surprised the Grangers did not ask what is a troll, why was it there and what will be done to stop this happening again.

I always figured Ron for a bigot given how he treats Hermione and his rather stong bias towards anything Slytherin. Maybe being away from his mum has allowed Ron's true nature to show.

The Weasley twins won't like being called a bullies or accept getting in trouble without a fight. That is the problem with the Weasley's there are so many of them to deal with.

It was a nice detail about the Hufflepuffs and the clubs as that house is usually a good one.

Given how the non-pure blood is treated in Hogwarts and in UK magical society I am amazed more students don't leave or try to seek revenge on the pure bloods by telling others about magic.

Some nice changes to Hogwarts, classes should be monitored, will those like Lucius Malfoy allow the changes to happen. I do wonder if other magical schools head hunt the students from Hogwarts with talent or do others schools exist in the UK to teach magical children as Hogwarts seems an elite school in reputation only.
Angel Girl5 chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
I like where you're going with this.

Please continue!
Starman800 chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
This is a good story, please keep writing, can't wait to see what happens. Love Ron Whomping, Hope Draco and Snape get there butts beat by harry.. :)
dennisud chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Good start though a bit forced at times. Remember not to make Ron so 2 dimensional as well as Snape.
StrongHermione chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Intriguing premise... this is a great start. I really like how the professors are jumping on all of this straight away - especially Dumbledore, that is not something you see often. I look forward to the next update :)
sparrowflyaway chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Wow, Ron's mean in this one. Still, I quite like it so far :3 please update soon!
Musings-of-Apathy chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Very good start for a story. Thank you for sharing.

Was a bit unnaturally rushed when Mrs. Granger said she wanted to see her daughter to Minerva producing the sock and ending the scene.
lord Martiya chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
It seems interesting, for now. I'm quite curious at the Twin's reaction at being outed as bullies, and how Snape will react.
S-Wanderer999 chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Well since Snape, thinks that they shouldn't alter how the pureblood students treat the half bloods and muggleborns students. Well maybe somebody should announce to the purebloods that Snape is only a half blood with a muggle father (I personally think half bloods like Harry are slightly more acceptable then a half blood who has one parent that is a pure muggle).

Also maybe they should have a couple of trustworthy adults go into the different year classes under polyjuice while the student they are impersonating, studies independently.
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