Reviews for Hermione's choice
DODO chapter 5 . 6/11/2020
You know, I have never been as offended and scandalized when reading a story, as I have by reading the last 2 paragraphs of this chapter (5).
Not only do you relish in some mob assaulting someone in the most despictable way (there is no excuse for rape and sexual assault, even to "punish" someone you really dont like, which - by the way - is a common excuse by rapists "they deserved it"), you also condone healers violating thier oath! Healers of any kind have sworn to treat everybody to their best ability regardless of the person to be treated.
To refuse proper treatment or purposely "treat" someone in a way to destroy their lifelyhood, thats really not what healers (should) do, and certainly should not be condoned or even encouraged! And NO, it certainly is not funny!
Sircus chapter 19 . 6/3/2020
This story was not for me. It felt like the writer wrote a fanfiction based on only the first book. The wizards and witches used logic to solve all their problems. It was very fairy tail esq. compared to mainstream fanfiction of the HP-verse.
DulcimaTheRavenclaw chapter 19 . 5/26/2020
wow, this was really good, I really liked how you wrote an entire world changing because of one simple action, it really made me think about what could have happened if say, harry went to Mcgonagall with evidence of Quirrelmort earlier or something. it could change the whole series! thanks for giving me something to focus on and ponder about when I was bored to death! I love your Hermione characterization, and in the books, I was surprised when she didn't tell the truth because though I understand her reasoning, her biggest fear was losing the magical world, but she was also a desperate little girl who really didn't have much to lose but her magic, lying, in a situation that might make her loose just that! sorry if you couldn't follow, I tend to ramble. hehe... oh well.
Dulce x
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Guest chapter 14 . 5/5/2020
This fic. I love this fic so much, I don’t even know where to begin with. Most fics mention the Dursley’s’ getting what they deserve but you actually described it. Ron, he has a character arc, dare I say better than JKR. Ron was a jerk but he improved and the Golden Trio is back. Hogwarts is so open minded and no Dumbledore bashing. Thank you so much for this read.
oSpxrrow chapter 19 . 5/4/2020
Woo! What a story - it's amazing!
AngelinaPriorincantatem chapter 19 . 4/30/2020
Bravoooo! Amazing!
I really enjoy this story.
Thank you
Thank you!

Millones de gracias for shearing your work!
AngelinaPriorincantatem chapter 17 . 4/29/2020
Hahahahahaha amazing how you worked the Malfoy problem... And I apreciate that you give a chance yo Draco.

You know? I was starting to think that Quirrelmort didn't exist in this story... now I see I was wrong
AngelinaPriorincantatem chapter 10 . 4/28/2020
Aaaaand the puff are sólo wise
AngelinaPriorincantatem chapter 10 . 4/28/2020
Oooohhhhhh
God
That goblin meeting was...just...dos...

Impecable

The timing with pettigrew was soooooo "Oh my f*king goood!"
AngelinaPriorincantatem chapter 9 . 4/28/2020
Hello again! I am not going to apologize for filling you with reviews, because, since I am also a fanfic writer, I suppose you are loving finding so many comments. This time I want to mention something that is from my perception, and that it does not matter if it is correct or not, but I have the impression that Ron has a psycho-emotional state of anguish, anxiety and depression, which is quite canon and I feel that you have highlighted it very well in this fic. His eating behavior and attitude towards school work are typical of children with this kind of problem. Thanks for making Ron SO human.

Oooohhhhh! The Dursley will era a bit shit now!
AngelinaPriorincantatem chapter 8 . 4/28/2020
How to put it? MARVELOUS!
You have done a awesome work with this story, and I haven't even finished it!

So fluid and pragmatic the way you show us the political background... and I can almost smell the maneuvers that will take place throughout this story ... and I cannot explain how anxious and enthusiastic the prospect makes me.

Once again, excellent work !
AngelinaPriorincantatem chapter 5 . 4/28/2020
Haaaahahahahaha I am having so much fun withths chapter!

Love the touch of parody!
AngelinaPriorincantatem chapter 4 . 4/28/2020
I don't now why my review have been posted in chapter 8n hahahaha... I've reed til chapter 4 so far.
AngelinaPriorincantatem chapter 8 . 4/28/2020
Hello! I'm from Argentina, so I can be wrong when writing this review.

So far I have read up to chapter 4 and I must say I love the story ! Especially this chapter.

I love to see that the school is taking such relevant actions regarding bullying and mistreatment. I am very surprised that Snape has made that decision (until now I have never read anything like that and it generates a lot of intrigue).

I love the community, self-management and self-support proposals that students make ! It would be wonderful for them to start growing their own food because they will learn the true value of work and care for ecology and solidarity economy. This has been one of the things that most excitement and enthusiasm has produced your story!

Well, I will continue reading, thank you very much for sharing your work.

I send you a big kiss!
The Punmaster chapter 19 . 4/23/2020
...Wow. I can honestly say that I have never read anything quite like this before.
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