Reviews for Hermione's choice |
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GreenEyesAreAwesome chapter 5 . 1/3/2022 Lol a pineapple, sideways...what kind of sick mind thinks of this stuff. This is one of the better ends for Snape, i loved it. |
Guest chapter 19 . 12/22/2021 This was the best story I have ever read, thank you for writing this. You are amazing and love you. |
Vahnimor chapter 10 . 12/8/2021 wow this story is really a turning into a one small act insights the dawn of a new era story for me. |
Guest chapter 12 . 12/5/2021 Just for the record, unless it changed on me, the three letter word you're referring to with 'donkey's bottom' is actually just an old word for 'donkey' (that's at least how it is in the New Testament). |
Pointer3109 chapter 1 . 11/24/2021 Hermione at St Trinnians. Heh. |
dead feather chapter 14 . 11/16/2021 This has been interesting but its taken now so far that this feels like crack. Everyone agreeing too much and all this orwellian nitpicking in everyones lives is disturbing. But very interesting ideas |
Guest chapter 19 . 11/7/2021 Wow, you sure like Malfoy. Did you suck so much Nazi dick that you couldn't help but project? Fuck you, asshole. |
Guest chapter 18 . 10/31/2021 Hermione a bully, nope I am sorry but I enjoyed your story until then,I agree with you about Ron in the beginning and even Harry participated by laughing at her,yes she was abrasive in the beginning but bully seems a bit much,also the twins are brilliant and it seems a shame that they were diminished as well You have written a very well thought out story and my opinions do not change that, even though fanfic is purely for enjoyment this story rang true in the beginning as I had my own issues with bullying, good luck with writing in the future and I hope that my review was not too much |
Wise Lion 17 chapter 16 . 10/6/2021 When reassessing your choices look back on the decisions others have made and see what you can do differently, looking forward see what benefits you can gain from setting on a different road . Can this be counted as a Slytherin mindset though? |
Wise Lion 17 chapter 8 . 10/6/2021 Wow, Economically speaking, Magical Britain is going to the dump if every muggle born/raised magical go on exodos back to the muggle world if they want better pay. High Unemployment rates leading to inflation, which would then result into depression. Socially, that would Magical Britain would be found out eventually when most (if not all) the muggle born/raised come back with barely acceptable credentials to even work in the rank and file of businesses, and be registered as 'homeschooled' individuals. Leading to the event of Mundane Britain's government sniffing around places for conspicuous activity, this, resulting them to discover the magical world... That analysis took some time ... |
generalwd40 chapter 14 . 9/23/2021 I have made the calculs for the duration of time needed by Vernon and Petunia to repaid harry and gringotts and it's approximately 14, 89 years straight at 12h/a day. |
BerserkLittleCook chapter 7 . 9/22/2021 Once again, if things were so bad then someone would've already done something about it |
BerserkLittleCook chapter 6 . 9/22/2021 Actually, there still could be bashing about that, since it's a matter of negligence, even if not on the magical guardian's part |
BerserkLittleCook chapter 6 . 9/22/2021 This part about culture is really nice worldbuilding. The titles and names are boring, family magics are standard, but the bits about how to behave, how to apologise properly and so on are really nice. Also, good job on the magical guardian subplot. I feared there would be more bashing because of that |
BerserkLittleCook chapter 5 . 9/22/2021 Daily Prophet describes a beating. A muggle-style beating. And condones it. Wtf. Actually, the whole thing feels savage and like something he wouldn't have let happen to himself. Like what he did with members of his House to help them understand the subject, it could be enough to fill the gap in workforce and the crisis wouldn't be as visible. Honestly, if it was as bad as to cause a lynch on him, it would've been stopped earlier. |