Reviews for Hermione's choice
Kai chapter 5 . 4/29/2021
Er, Pomona, you DO realise that Binns IS a ghost? And that that was the start of the problem in the first place? Furthermore history classes in school aren't about hearing interesting, funny, or shocking anecdotes from a survivor. It's about the current shape of society and what led to that shape, everything that influenced over the centuries how we are organised today politically, economically, morally. While it may be interesting to be told what showy foods were served when [ghost] attended [event important for the time] or which [great writer's] works they have watched in the debut performance, it's got nothing to do with history education.
Guest chapter 5 . 4/27/2021
Sad about the meanness aimed at Severus.
Fick Chick chapter 19 . 4/26/2021
Nice fic.
Fick Chick chapter 12 . 4/26/2021
What does skamelarish mean? I couldn't find it on the web.
G chapter 19 . 4/20/2021
Thanks
Jonn Wolfe chapter 19 . 4/17/2021
Lovely story. Thank you for writing!
Ariadne Venegas chapter 19 . 4/16/2021
What Harry does for a living?
Ariadne Venegas chapter 4 . 4/16/2021
The last part would have never happen because Dumbly wanted Severus near him. So maybe he would have put him as potion brewer for the school or finding him another post but there is no way that he have left his spy go.
LLGuido chapter 19 . 4/1/2021
Very imaginative "what if" story. I read this in one setting after finding it by accident. I liked the way the story was presented. It showed where one decision could lead. Other people would have to act on the on the information but this could apply in everyday life. Maybe timing and audience of our dissemination of opinions would make a greater impact but it is highly plausible. -LLGuido-
gginsc chapter 19 . 4/1/2021
I always wondered why Hermione lied. There was no reason for it.
FotoDi chapter 19 . 3/29/2021
The ripple effect...
I like it.
psychotic-olaf chapter 8 . 3/1/2021
... what about the inheritance test?
It was ok chapter 1 . 2/14/2021
I was excited about the idea of this story when I saw it recommended, and while I thought there were some very interesting ideas it was very dry to read.

The characters are all very OOC. There is also little to none personality given to the characters, they all speak and act in the same way. Even the “villains” speak and act in the same way as the “heroes”. This lack of personality makes the characters dull.

I liked that you tried to tackle bullying at Hogwarts, however I felt that the bullying problem was not ok when it came to the “villains” but it was ok for the “heroes” which actually made me sympathize more for the “villains” and not particularly like the “heroes”. The changes came about to unrealistically fast to be believed and by the end I felt all that really the only change that was accomplished was that the “heroes” and “villains” positions in society were reversed.

I felt that throughout the story there were some great storylines starting to happen but then they were just quickly resolved and wrapped up neatly and all the potential action and potential for a good storyline was lost.

Overall it has some interesting ideas, I would like to see you develop these ideas and the characters more.
Legend of Kindness chapter 19 . 2/16/2021
This was great! I loved it )
Not what I normally go for but I'm so glad I started to read this.
brady66 chapter 16 . 2/14/2021
I don’t know how I feel about Hermione in this chapter. She is very unreasonable in this chapter. Why hold Draco to this stupid debt? If she wanted she could have made it a lower amount...Draco was trying in the meeting. It turned me off of her.
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