I like the story but i don’t like the mentions of picking cotton. Lets be historically correct, white people wasn’t picking cotton.

~A Black Woman

Hey, Hoodie! I've just finished reading the Spanish version of Dirty South Drug Wars. We loved this Edward and Bella, their forbidden love and all their lemons. Though it was sad we lost Alice, we're happy everyone got their happy ending and their revenge. Thank you for allowing Pali to share your story in another language. Greetings from México!

Hey, Hoodie! I've just finished reading the Spanish version of Dirty South Drug Wars. We loved this Edward and Bella, their forbidden love and all their lemons. Though it was sad we lost Alice, we're happy everyone got their happy ending and their revenge. Thank you for allowing Pali to share your story in another language. Greetings from (GuatemalaFlores, Petén)!graciassssssss graciassssssss graciassssssss graciassssssss graciassssssss graciassssssss graciassssssss

Definitely crying here. Bella’s lines are awesome.

How did Bella know about McKenna?

Okay, I didn’t see that plot twist coming. What about the but about James being buried in the Swan plot? I’m just pleased I can read on.

So bloody heartbreaking and Aro needs to suffer.

just finished breakaway Bella, you are an amazing writer and it hope you go on to be published! I hope this act is active /3

Oh Alice.

I dont know who o dislike more in this and we arent even half way through. Liam needs to be brought down many pegs and Edward is making me very mad.

It actually sounds just like something a scumbag psychopath like Aro would do. Definitely not expected tho.

I have this awful feeling that Bella is gonna have to use that gun on Aro to protect either herself or Edward.

That was beautiful!
I had read this story on Fictionpad and never forgot it. So happy I found it again.

Love what has happened to all the bad people, it's fitting. A lovely proposal, made me smile.

I love their house. Feel sad for Nana, Bella was important to her.