Reviews for Teatime With Albus |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this is excellent writing and an excellent story. i can almost see Voldemort's face when all the Slytherins sat back down. it would be so funny. keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... This is very good! Very well written and I love the ideas behind it! Especially the timed, word-activated potion. This was... Just amazing! _ Fluffy Bugs Inc., Bryt |
![]() ![]() EXCELLENT! Loved Pragmatic!Snape and Calculating!Sly!Albus. The Imperio potion was a great idea. Wish the story had been longer... |
![]() ![]() ![]() ur rite 2 b proud of it, this is gr8! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was wonderfully written. I love the ideas you came up with! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent! I love the idea of a "bottled spell" and Snape having such a plan to thwart Voldemort (hey, that rhymes! Heh.). Anyway, very original and nicely written. Good job! :-) Gina |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is sooo cool! I think you should either continue with this (the Snape bottled imperio plan) or you should show us the other teacher's meetings. Maybe even have one of them actually understand what Dumbledore is up to. I mean really...not all Gryfs/Huffs/Ravens don't know a cunning plan when they see one! E-mail me when you post again...my e-mail is . This is really cool! Keep it going! |
![]() ![]() This was really intriguing. I loved the view of Snape being compared to Autumn, in contrast to Albus's Spring/Summer. The insider view of the both of them was so interesting, and I really think that you've captured Albus's character brilliantly, the cunning mind buried under the harmless surface. I thought the part with Snape putting the imperio curse on the slytherins was really thought provoking and actually quite sad, well it made me stop and think! That was really excellant, I shall be looking out for more of your writing in the future! xXx |