Reviews for Rebellion
Radio Free Death chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
I like the idea. The execution could use some work. So far its angst piled on angst for shock value and feels disconnected to the story of the main character. I'd rather it be shown through character interaction and not have the angst be a matte painting for the narrator to admire. You also need a beta to fix up on sentence structure and punctuation. Hope that helped!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Looking good so far, can't wait to see how he will start a whole rebellion