Reviews for Dhampir of Yokai Academy
Bigfluffy97 chapter 12 . 4/9
Just finished this is one night and I have to say I got to love it I hope you update this soon and keep up the good work. what I like most about this us the way Natsu and the Mokas relationship progress but I wish they would hurry up and kiss. Once again love the fic keep up the good work man.
iStyx chapter 1 . 3/27
Meh, just canon rehash with pathetic weakling OC named Naruto. Didn't bother to even finish first chapter.
Guest chapter 12 . 3/10
When you reach rubys appearance you should have kushina be the only human she admires and during the fight with ruby should have kushina arrive hair floating in nine tails as she does when pissed and basically have her see how hurt everyone is and does her ninja storm ultimate on ruby
Fox-chan chapter 12 . 3/10
I cant wait till akua returns also this is just me id picture her supporting naruto x moka if only cause if they mary naruto will end up her brother in law
Guest chapter 12 . 3/10
For the verbal tics id prefer ya know tho dattebane and dattebayo will be fine

And for a oc chapter have a female student get uber jealous of moka for being close to naruto and attempt to remove her from the equation but that ends with inner moka cracking a skull

And do you think you could have kushina notice moka cant remove her seal herself and modify it so she can which leaves naruto and moka as the only ones who can remove it

Heres another idea have a chapter where everyone visits narutos family home when they finish the year of school
Guest chapter 1 . 3/8
This is an interesting take on this type of fanfic i cant wait till i reach the end

and please have a fight where naruto and inner moka both roundhouse kick the enemy in the face on opposite sides while saying know your place
Guest chapter 12 . 3/4
Do you think kushina could help tsukune channel any spirit energy he has cause i feel he'd want to at least help the others when it comes done to it and after seeing kushina and naruto use it id think he would be curious about if he has any spirit energy himself
Nightwing1287 chapter 1 . 1/13
I never understood why every fanfiction seems to have it where the characters paired always constantly deny the attraction they have for the other then something big happens that makes them kiss then boom theyre a couple like why cant it be like "well shit I like this girl I'm gonna ask her out on a date and see where this goes"
Kenka chapter 11 . 11/8/2017
YOU SHOULD HAVE BEEN ON TEAM FOUR-STAR! I LAUGHED SO HARD I DARN-NEAR PISSED MYSELF!
Kenka chapter 4 . 10/30/2017
I like to do things.
What things? You don't do things.
Yes, I do, I take enthusiastic walks in the woods.
And kill homicidal vampire priests.
'Very' enthusiastic walks.

I lo-o-o-ove that abridged show... and killing things because it's fun.
Oblivion168 chapter 7 . 10/25/2017
So he had a sibling relationship with Akua when he was younger, this should be interesting.
Oblivion168 chapter 6 . 10/25/2017
The Omake, oh my god you are a genius!
Guest chapter 6 . 10/6/2017
I have to say, i love all of the hellsing ultimate abridged referances.
Guest chapter 12 . 10/1/2017
For omakes can i suggest using some ideas from dbz abridged like vegetas i am the hype and the 3 whole androids pretty sure that makes eight and have naruto get repeatedly punched in the dick like vegeta in cooler return You could use some jokes from other abridged series like yaroshiens fate/cero or danmachi abridged
Perhaps have a deadpool movie reference
Guest chapter 12 . 9/29/2017
I LOVE this story!
Please update real soon!
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