|Reviews for Demon revolution|
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/10
So are you still continuing this story or not I mean its been awhile and well nothing just wondering because I have to say I really like this story and I want to read more so keep up this good work and update soon.
| bankai777 chapter 3 . 12/12/2013
you could have hanabi and yugao join the pack.
| bankai777 chapter 2 . 12/12/2013
koyuki and mei terumi could join the pack.
| bankai777 chapter 1 . 12/12/2013
you could add shion and shizuka into the harem.
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/10/2013
Really good chapter hope you update soon.
| mr grimjaw chapter 3 . 12/10/2013
good can Tenten and Shion join and Hokuto hotaru kin temari samui and Kurotsuchi
i liked this pless up date stata
| Tactician chapter 3 . 12/10/2013
How about the entire population of wave added to his pack were they are heard about naruto being a contaner of the fox and still saw him as a hero. So when they got wind of all the demon and them turning humans they guessed right that foxes were not far behind. So when naruto's pack shows up there all for joining naruto, and this also brings an oputunity for the change like with sakera to become pleasant to the changer so they would imbrase it faster
| The Keeper of Worlds chapter 3 . 12/10/2013
Oh, very nice, and if/when you do lemons it'll be intense!
| Midnight Flower26 chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
well actually I thought it could be narusaku and then have ino and choji or inoshika
| Gohan Videl fan 489 chapter 2 . 7/17/2013
wow nice chapter man hope you can update soon.
| EmperorDraco7 chapter 2 . 3/28/2013
Not a bad chapter, you've done a good job my friend and I hope to see more very soon.
| Don 77 chapter 2 . 3/9/2013
whoa sweet chapter man please keep going.
| Nargus chapter 2 . 3/2/2013
I might suggest checking mispelling of words and people names, as well as missing period and comma? It will certainly make the story better.
| switch chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
for the pairing, NaruSaku. though i don't mind if you add Ino. xD
| thedarkpokemaster chapter 2 . 2/26/2013
kick ass man this chapter rocked please keep it up my friend.