Reviews for Princess of the Moon, Dawn Hikari
Leonidasfan786 chapter 4 . 1/11
Please finish this story or make another one like it please.
Sakura Touko chapter 4 . 9/17/2013
Brilliant, already I want to read the following chapter
m.afumafu chapter 4 . 8/17/2013
Plz update :-)
Ai Star chapter 4 . 5/28/2013
lol what did Dawn's mum do?
piplup225 chapter 4 . 5/26/2013
yay! i cant wait 2 read the nxt chapter! plz update wenevr u can!
Eeveexme chapter 4 . 5/26/2013
Awww… it's a sweet chapter! Especially when Gary hugged Emma! Plus I wonder what was on the sheet that Paul wanted to ask Dawn! XD
Ai Star chapter 3 . 3/21/2013
cool story! keep up the good work! -
Reading-is-4-life chapter 3 . 3/10/2013
midnightphoenixes chapter 3 . 3/10/2013
The story is great so far, but you need to work on trying to change the way you introduce the characters. I can't think of how, but it just sounds like they're listing themselves out...
Still, loved the opening, and can't wait for newer chapters!
Th3Walk3rSlay3r chapter 3 . 3/8/2013
Awesomeness! keep up the awesome work!
RaveOn-Goodbye chapter 3 . 3/8/2013
The character introductions at the end felt very needless especialy with so many characters. Also I find it odd that Dawn got complimated for be a child of a legendary when there was someone that introduce themself as a child of Arceus
StarChild97 chapter 2 . 3/4/2013
Starting out great, hope you update soon.
The Great Jay Gatsby chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
Hey, so it's really good but you should consider not switching POV's as often as you have. It makes the story less confusing. I'm not saying that you can only have one POV'S per chapter just only switch like three to four times though out t he whole chapter.
funstt chapter 2 . 2/2/2013
This is weird but awesome haha a pretty unique idea can't wait to hear what's next :)
Th3Walk3rSlay3r chapter 2 . 2/2/2013
OMG! chapter two is amazing! i love it! cant wait 4 the next.
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