|Reviews for Melting Points|
| Tanba Josav chapter 2 . 2/4/2013
I'm with Marta, I had no idea what Aaron was doing with the camera either. I'm liking seeing these two begin to properly connect.
I'm looking forward to seeing where you go next
| bonitasenorita chapter 2 . 2/4/2013
Wow great chapters so far
| Alpha Flyer chapter 2 . 2/4/2013
Loved the snappy tac-tac-tac of the dialogue of two very bright people; the little glimpses of normalcy in an abnormal world (bagels, Subway, Sudoku, family dichotomies). This: "Justin Bieber?" "There are lines I won't cross."
Basically, my friend, I adore this very adult, very real look at the unseen gaps between the flashy action. What fan fiction should be.
| assantra chapter 2 . 2/3/2013
I like this a lot and would love to see more of it. Its very different.
| ladygris chapter 2 . 2/3/2013
"There are lines I won't cross." ROFL!
Another wonderful chapter! I thoroughly enjoyed the almost mundane blended with the reality that she's dependent on him right now. The little moments-needing food, catching the napkin, the headboard hurting her neck-all offset the panic at the beginning. And they enhance the quiet moment these two shared.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
| Tanba Josav chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
I like what you've written and can't wait to see what other missing scenes you'll write
| Kshar chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
I really liked this and the thoughtful way you characterize Marta. I look forward to reading more!
| H chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
Very good. I think you captured Marta's tone and cadence accurately! Can't wait to read more
| Alpha Flyer chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
You succeeded beautifully in capturing the rawness and hurt we saw all too briefly, when Aaron realizes he was never more than a number to the person who changed his life. Love the economy of your prose; you give us exactly enough.
I look forward to taking the rest of that journey with you.
| Elysabeth chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
I liked it a lot, very interesting
hope I can read more soon.
| ladygris chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
Wonderful, wonderful writing!
I really enjoyed this scene because we never really see Aaron tell Marta his name. So, to have this little tidbit was really fantastic.
Looking forward to more!
| astridv chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
I feel you really captured their characters. Looking forward to more.
| EmleeDee chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Nicely done. Great job capturing the characters. Hope to read more.