Reviews for PTB's Writing Challenge 2013
Guest chapter 10 . 9/28
WTF! I can't believe there isn't more to this story! I have so many questions left! They slept together?! What happened?! What happened with Royce that night of the bonfire?! I need answers to these questions! Ugh.
Guest chapter 9 . 9/28
Wait Bella and Royce slept together that day at the beach?! I don't think so...I think Royce was blackmailing her though
Guest chapter 6 . 9/28
I can't believe he took Royce's side! Royce is despicable. Why did Alice get with him?! I think she ran off bc Royce raped her too and she didn't want to get married anymore, but she saw how Esme handled Bella. I liked that this chapter was in the POV of the was like being a fly on the wall.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/28
Good golly miss Molly, what the heck happened between them?! Was she sexually assaulted? That's what I'm guessing based on her being angry that his lawyer got the offender a slap on the wrist. Edward is such an ass, I get he's angry but to threaten take of her daughter away from her is beyond harsh.
shannon30033 chapter 1 . 9/24
Maybe finish this one too, fellow marshmallow? Just a thought...
KDMCAM chapter 10 . 9/21
I love this! I hope u are able to finish it one day!
Bikergirl08 chapter 10 . 10/12/2016
I'm so bummed, just found this and looks like it's dead :(((
shannon30033 chapter 9 . 4/8/2016
Well, sorry this one wasn't done. I loved every word of it. Thanks.
shannon30033 chapter 10 . 4/8/2016
"A gun, Edward? You brought a gun?" Loving Bellronica...
shannon30033 chapter 1 . 4/8/2016
Oh...Bellronica. Love it.
Sunshirae chapter 6 . 11/13/2015
I truly like how you use the desk to get personal about Bella and how it see's Bella and Edward's interaction. Nicely done. Thank you for writing.
Guest chapter 10 . 8/22/2015
Where is the rest pf the chapters after 10?
aria chapter 10 . 4/24/2015
please update! this just got so much more interesting
Sooz88 chapter 10 . 2/12/2015
HUH? Plz tell ,e u will finish this story, I love it, plzzzzzzz xx
ivanhoeslady chapter 8 . 11/2/2014
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