Reviews for PTB's Writing Challenge 2013
mdsngrc chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
Loving this! Although I do believe Bella should have told Edward about Royce.
Fudgy Buddy chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
I. Hate. Royce. So much! I'm so damn curious to how things happened and where the hell Alice is. I love how all these prompts are still part of the same story. I never read one like this one before. Thanks for writing!
pnkats chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
God I hate it when I accidentally hit enter before I am done so I am having to leave a guest review so it all appears now! Awesome chapter as always. Hope if Alice was talking about Royce in her diary that she changes if she hasnt already for Jasper. Wonder who is stalking Edward. Is Tanya around anymore I wonder. Royce is just Yuk! He is jealous of Edward and always wants what he has.
mauigirl60 chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
The song lyrics perfectly fit the story. These two share such passion. Right now, it's anger but those sparks are definitely flying back and forth. You really make these characters pop off the page. Good job, bb! xox
Lilypad10 chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
Interesting!
Luvtwismut chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
Who is this stalker? Maybe Alice? Speaking of Alice, has she run off with Jasper? I have so many questions and cannot wait for the answers!
Thanks for the update!
Xoxo,
Jen
Glam.mam chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
Awsummmm this is just killing me with mystery and intreage x
debslmac chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
:):)
divyvicki chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
Well, that wad certainly interesting.
littlelizruth chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
Wow. Royce jealous of Edward? And I don't think it's Royce that she was mooning over... Cold Alice be the stalker?
roxiegirl chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
Awesome! The plot thickens. And damn Royce is a skeeze. I used to know guys like that in high school. *shivers*.
SunflowerFran chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
We learned a lot about Bella and Edward's past in this chapter...And we see what part Royce played in their lives. Interesting...
GorGirl chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
I hope that Alice is off somewhere and is safe. Maybe she finally realized how vile Royce is and ran off?
cejsmom chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
Awesome as always. Now, I wonder who is stalking them. Hope the person's name doesn't start with an R.
dlhk chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
Ugh. Royce is so evil. Too bad Edward didnt know it earlier. I'm hoping it was jasper that Alice wanted, and not Royce. Although considering she's engaged to Royce, idk. Where is Alice hiding? The riddle with the picture is totally creepy. I'm guessing the answer is "I love you". Anyway, great story. I need more answers! Lol. -mommyofboth
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