|Reviews for PTB's Writing Challenge 2013|
| roxiegirl chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
Awesome! The plot thickens. And damn Royce is a skeeze. I used to know guys like that in high school. *shivers*.
| SunflowerFran chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
We learned a lot about Bella and Edward's past in this chapter...And we see what part Royce played in their lives. Interesting...
| GorGirl chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
I hope that Alice is off somewhere and is safe. Maybe she finally realized how vile Royce is and ran off?
| cejsmom chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
Awesome as always. Now, I wonder who is stalking them. Hope the person's name doesn't start with an R.
| dlhk chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
Ugh. Royce is so evil. Too bad Edward didnt know it earlier. I'm hoping it was jasper that Alice wanted, and not Royce. Although considering she's engaged to Royce, idk. Where is Alice hiding? The riddle with the picture is totally creepy. I'm guessing the answer is "I love you". Anyway, great story. I need more answers! Lol. -mommyofboth
| JulesColes3 chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
Oh my. Edward need to read his sister diary. Bella needs to tell him how Royce acted or hear it from others around. I wonder if Alice is ok and maybe trying to get the truth out. Because I do believe Royce is jealous of Edward. Please post soon I love this story.
| wonderfullybedazzled chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
Ug Royce is evil...
| lesocialbutterfly chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
Roy has it bad for Edward? (I find that strangely... Hot!) LMAO. Was his homo tendencies too much for Alice & she ran! Would this be all Royce's doing? I'm still wondering if its Jasper Alice is talking about? Dear God, I'm dying for more & all this after you message earlier. You're not making it easy on us, you're really not! ;) love it.
| Melany333 chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
More more more :) Love it
| Kgunter34 chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
| 3c cullen chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
Loved this will there be more?
| jane210 chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
Great chapter, I can't wait to read more.
| smooshie55 chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
Wow, this is so good. You write the best female relationships of any fic writer out there. I'm obsessed with the girl friendships/hateships in your stories, sometimes more than the romance/smut- just sometimes! Your girl fights rock my world.
This story also makes the time between Slowest Burn updates all the sweeter:-) (that wasn't a complaint by the way, the wait is worth it!)
You are amazingly talented, it makes me jealous.
| Nrbl1 chapter 6 . 3/11/2013
Loved the POV
| oceancitygirl chapter 6 . 3/6/2013
this is really amazing, you are such a good writer. are you inspired by veronica mars in any way? i love that show, and love how different this is