Reviews for PTB's Writing Challenge 2013
mauigirl60 chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
The song lyrics perfectly fit the story. These two share such passion. Right now, it's anger but those sparks are definitely flying back and forth. You really make these characters pop off the page. Good job, bb! xox
Lilypad10 chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
Luvtwismut chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
Who is this stalker? Maybe Alice? Speaking of Alice, has she run off with Jasper? I have so many questions and cannot wait for the answers!
Thanks for the update!
Glam.mam chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
Awsummmm this is just killing me with mystery and intreage x
debslmac chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
divyvicki chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
Well, that wad certainly interesting.
littlelizruth chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
Wow. Royce jealous of Edward? And I don't think it's Royce that she was mooning over... Cold Alice be the stalker?
roxiegirl chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
Awesome! The plot thickens. And damn Royce is a skeeze. I used to know guys like that in high school. *shivers*.
SunflowerFran chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
We learned a lot about Bella and Edward's past in this chapter...And we see what part Royce played in their lives. Interesting...
GorGirl chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
I hope that Alice is off somewhere and is safe. Maybe she finally realized how vile Royce is and ran off?
cejsmom chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
Awesome as always. Now, I wonder who is stalking them. Hope the person's name doesn't start with an R.
dlhk chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
Ugh. Royce is so evil. Too bad Edward didnt know it earlier. I'm hoping it was jasper that Alice wanted, and not Royce. Although considering she's engaged to Royce, idk. Where is Alice hiding? The riddle with the picture is totally creepy. I'm guessing the answer is "I love you". Anyway, great story. I need more answers! Lol. -mommyofboth
JulesColes3 chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
Oh my. Edward need to read his sister diary. Bella needs to tell him how Royce acted or hear it from others around. I wonder if Alice is ok and maybe trying to get the truth out. Because I do believe Royce is jealous of Edward. Please post soon I love this story.
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
Ug Royce is evil...
lesocialbutterfly chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
Roy has it bad for Edward? (I find that strangely... Hot!) LMAO. Was his homo tendencies too much for Alice & she ran! Would this be all Royce's doing? I'm still wondering if its Jasper Alice is talking about? Dear God, I'm dying for more & all this after you message earlier. You're not making it easy on us, you're really not! ;) love it.
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