|Reviews for PTB's Writing Challenge 2013|
| lud chapter 10 . 8/2/2013
I'm so glad you updated this story, she is very different to burn, all the characters are completely different from Burning, Edward is a jerk, Royce is cruel, i love the friendship of Bella and Rosie. They had sex? Need Edward crawl, regret what you did, and maybe Bella could forgive .I think it strange that Edward has not been of interest to know the child.
It is a pity that you are not as invested in PTB, this is a great story.
| Courtney37 chapter 10 . 7/31/2013
Oh my god PLEASE tell he we'll be getting an inside look into that scene bc HOLY HELL! I need to know between last chapter and this one what went down. Can't wait to read more. Thanks again.
| Luvtwismut chapter 10 . 7/29/2013
Thanks for the update! I'm still loving this story!
| dayuuuumgirl chapter 10 . 7/28/2013
| fortunecomet chapter 10 . 7/27/2013
I am so glad to see an update. This story is so intriguing and I love all the characters. It's great to see you continuing this. Looking forward to more!
| glitterr chapter 10 . 7/27/2013
An update! I flove this story and stalk it regularly hoping for a new chap. Thank you and I hope you continue!
| jmeec316 chapter 10 . 7/26/2013
How can you leave us there?!
| Noelluna chapter 10 . 7/26/2013
So glad you updated this! I love your Bella and the story being told. Sooo she broke rule number 5! Any chance of some kind of flashback or something?! Really hope you continue this soon. I'm curious to see what happened to jake and what the pictures of slice mean...oh and how Edward is feeling after all of this! :)
| DawnsWhimsy chapter 10 . 7/25/2013
I am so glad you updated this I have missed it! I have no words for Bella but I have hope.
| avagurl chapter 10 . 7/25/2013
This is a wonderful story. Thanks for writing.
| jimemon chapter 10 . 7/25/2013
Very very intrigued, great chapter!
| SLKerouac chapter 10 . 7/25/2013
Poor Isabella. She will never be able to get Edward out of her life no matter how hard she tries!
| mdsngrc chapter 10 . 7/25/2013
Pretty sure I would've broken rule number five as well...LOL! So happy to see an update. I love this story, and I can't wait to get more of it. ;)
| CassandraLowery chapter 10 . 7/25/2013
Glad to see this story start back up-I've really missed it!
| roxiegirl chapter 10 . 7/25/2013
Well shit. They had sex? Did I miss that? I'm going to have to re-read when you're done. My brain is full of too much ff and I have a serious case of CRS. But I remember I liked the chapter and appreciate the update!