Reviews for PTB's Writing Challenge 2013
Erikajo chapter 4 . 2/8/2013
Ooh, SO good!
Guest chapter 4 . 2/8/2013
Oh gross! Bella slept with Royce? Man I can't wait to see where this goes!
JulesColes3 chapter 4 . 2/8/2013
Wow he has anger issues and need to think before he speaks. Did he not think theirs a reason why his mother told him not to speak until they return. Especially since Alice is missing. Can't wait until the next post.
Rita01tx chapter 4 . 2/8/2013
Royce? No f'n' way!? Someone's lyin' their ass off!
debslmac chapter 4 . 2/8/2013
lud chapter 4 . 2/8/2013
This story just gets better!
Apparently Royce wanted Bella, or, was angry that Bella love Edward, and not him.
I just think the way that Bella feels betrayed, she not tricked Edward.
For more, anxious.
shaz308 chapter 4 . 2/8/2013
I hope Edward finds out the truth soon. Royce must be the bad guy in this, surely.
banshee69 chapter 4 . 2/8/2013
I'm loving the drama so far. Can't wait for more details to come forth. I'm wondering if Alice may have took off on her own, setting her disappearance up as a means to bring her family back together. I'm also wondering if Alice planned it after finding out about whatever it is Royce did to Bella, to get Edward back home. I'm thinking Royce set Bella up to cause Edward and her to breakup.
littlelizruth chapter 4 . 2/8/2013
So Bella crying rape and Royce is crying whore? I wonder... No Royce is always a loser.
shaeskye chapter 4 . 2/8/2013
I can't believe Katelyn is Royce's. He had at have raped her. Right?
Aryn.Saylor12 chapter 4 . 2/8/2013
oh my. i am so intrigued it is killing me! lol.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
Bella and Royce?, No, no, please tell me it's a misunderstanding, just urghhh
tff000 chapter 4 . 2/8/2013
b and royce?
smooshie55 chapter 4 . 2/8/2013
Oh no! Royce could be the father? Call Maury...
ifIcouldBeQueenforAday chapter 3 . 2/7/2013
I am really excited to see where this is headed! Big fan of TSB, btw :) you rock chica!
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