Reviews for PTB's Writing Challenge 2013
shaz308 chapter 4 . 2/8/2013
I hope Edward finds out the truth soon. Royce must be the bad guy in this, surely.
banshee69 chapter 4 . 2/8/2013
I'm loving the drama so far. Can't wait for more details to come forth. I'm wondering if Alice may have took off on her own, setting her disappearance up as a means to bring her family back together. I'm also wondering if Alice planned it after finding out about whatever it is Royce did to Bella, to get Edward back home. I'm thinking Royce set Bella up to cause Edward and her to breakup.
littlelizruth chapter 4 . 2/8/2013
So Bella crying rape and Royce is crying whore? I wonder... No Royce is always a loser.
shaeskye chapter 4 . 2/8/2013
I can't believe Katelyn is Royce's. He had at have raped her. Right?
Aryn.Saylor12 chapter 4 . 2/8/2013
oh my. i am so intrigued it is killing me! lol.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
Bella and Royce?, No, no, please tell me it's a misunderstanding, just urghhh
tff000 chapter 4 . 2/8/2013
b and royce?
smooshie55 chapter 4 . 2/8/2013
Oh no! Royce could be the father? Call Maury...
ifIcouldBeQueenforAday chapter 3 . 2/7/2013
I am really excited to see where this is headed! Big fan of TSB, btw :) you rock chica!
reds-red chapter 2 . 2/7/2013
Oh shit. I don't know if I have big enough angsty pants! f_%#.
GorGirl chapter 3 . 2/7/2013
What an asshole!
TheObsessed1 chapter 3 . 2/7/2013
Oh my God; my heart is just pouning in my chest!
I can't wait to find out what happened. I have to go read happy stories right after this one cause the angst is so high. I definately think a lot of people are hooked on this story already. I know I am.
deesirius chapter 3 . 2/7/2013
Great. He's an asshole.
Luvtwismut chapter 3 . 2/7/2013
Well that didn't go well at all. ;-)
rcherry1977 chapter 3 . 2/7/2013
Oh snap! Thats not good! So much bad blood between the two... Now, whose baby's daddy? Great beginning... Thank you!
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