Reviews for PTB's Writing Challenge 2013
Karen-777 chapter 3 . 2/6/2013
Damn...learned so much here! But ya left me wanting so much more! Great chapter...thanks so much.
tpea1288 chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
I love this Bella! Feisty & kick ass but a complete softie when it comes to her daughter.
tpea1288 chapter 2 . 2/6/2013
Wow! Blast from the past! It is evident that Bella has been deeply hurt but has a support system now.
Erikajo chapter 3 . 2/6/2013
Oh boy. Can't wait to read what happens next. :)
PCCTwiFF23 chapter 3 . 2/6/2013
Omg, I'm so tempted to not read for a while, to gather a few chapters so I could read it all in a batch. I'm dyyyyiiingggg here with wanting to know what the hell happened! My guess is that Royce forced himself on Bella and told Edward otherwise but the baby is Edward's because she was already prego when she was assaulted. That's my guess. And good for Bella for not taking Edward's shit. Oh! And I bet Alice is married to Royce (not by choice) and Royce made Alice disappear. Yep, those are my guesses. And I'll grudgingly read the next chapter and I only say that because I want to know already! Lol
roxiegirl chapter 3 . 2/6/2013
Oh fuck. I love a mystery! But of course Kate is Edwards? And he's a lawyer. This doesn't sound good for Bella. Love it!
twinmomma chapter 3 . 2/6/2013
Holy cow... That is one dramatic start. I hope there's a HEA planned for Edward and Bella - evn though I have no idea how you'll pull it off after that opening :)
smooshie55 chapter 3 . 2/6/2013
Shit just got real.
Melany333 chapter 3 . 2/6/2013
Love it, but what is Bella's daughter's name? Nessie,Vakate, or Kate
tpea1288 chapter 3 . 2/6/2013
Loving this! It has mystery, love, revenge, passion, anger & hurt.

Still don't know enough about Edward & Bella's past. Both seemed to have loved each other & both seemed to feel betrayed by each other. Each thinks the other did not return their love & is the "bad guy."

Practical concerns: Edward's threats are meaningless. No judge will ever give him full custody. He will be lucky to get joint eventually. It is disgusting that he has threatened to use his innocent child to punish Bella & is willing to hurt his child to do it.

It is also disgusting if Bella kept Edward from his child out of malice or spite. There are almost no good reasons to keep a father & child apart except if the father is a danger to his child. This might be the case. The fact that his own mother seemed to agree that Kate was better off without her dad is powerful.

Edward can make things difficult for Bella through Kate but Bella already has won Kate's heart. Edward will lose his daughter if he uses her or attacks her mother.

It seems there was a massive failure of communication when they broke up. I hope so. I'm hoping Edward can be a decent loving father to Kate. If not, I hope Bella cuts off his balls & has them for breakfast!

But Edward has no hope of full custody-none. And Bella was not legally required to notify him he was a father. It's on him to keep contact with any potential baby mama's to see if he's a daddy!
Kgunter34 chapter 3 . 2/6/2013
Lawd, I am getting out the lawn chair and popcorn. He fucked up and I can't wait to see him brought down. Great chapter.
JulesColes3 chapter 3 . 2/6/2013
Wow what happened between them. Please post soon I live this story. I hope theirs a HEA for them.
angelspinknose chapter 3 . 2/6/2013
i'm interested. keep up the great writing.
CassandraLowery chapter 3 . 2/6/2013

Cassandra :)
Jlyons0424 chapter 3 . 2/6/2013
Wowza! Intense! LOVE IT!
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