|Reviews for The Long Road|
| Jamie chapter 15 . 7/17
I loved your story!
| Pinkypiesoccer chapter 15 . 4/9
I love your writing! You are one of the vary few writers that can capture my attention.
(P.s. Can you pretty please write about the kids life? I would love to see how they interact with the team because of there mix of power.)
| KittyLaPink chapter 10 . 1/6
Absolutely loved it!
| BartWLewis chapter 15 . 7/30/2014
Awesome ending, and awesome names for the twins.
| Wut the fudge chapter 15 . 7/30/2014
decent ending. U couldve had a little more happening than just them watching a game and putting the kids to bed. But I do like the kinda-cliffhanger! I hope u do write more! (Just work on your endings a little lol)
| JasonVUK chapter 15 . 7/30/2014
:D That was fabulous! I'm gunna read the whole thing from the very start again :3 from Battles Within!
:-) Man it's been so long but it's been great, I loved it so very much :D
Thank you for writing it :D
| creatorX33 chapter 15 . 7/30/2014
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/25/2014
U left me hanging noy cool
| chibi scooby chapter 3 . 7/2/2014
what is a chakra?
| pyrosnightmare chapter 14 . 5/29/2014
Agh, that's where you're leaving it? Please, at least tell me they aren't cliche bbrae babies.
I read through both halves of the story in a day, and didn't stop for reviews along the way. It was just that good a story.
| echosong258 chapter 14 . 3/4/2014
Classic escape :) managing to get away right before everything is about to explode never gets old.
Glass you're back, I look forward to the next chapter and I suspect the ending of your story is near ;)
Best of luck!
| BartWLewis chapter 14 . 3/4/2014
| dj25taz chapter 14 . 3/1/2014
| RavenofSilver chapter 14 . 2/28/2014
POST SOON! I need to know what happens next. Poor Rose... She's always had it so hard...
| JasonVUK chapter 14 . 2/28/2014
8O That was amazing! 8D Everyone is okay! YAY! The Beast and Rage saved the day, sort of o,,o 8D YAY