|Reviews for Humiliated and in love|
| HomestuckBackwash chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
cool story, my favorite couple
| Technical Technicalities chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
Haha, I'm indifferent about Jock
| NerdyNightStocker chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
Yeah, this couple is pretty hard to write. Thankfully it's not impossible. Lightning and Jo really clash when it comes to sports. I loved Brick coming along and telling Jo the truth about her position in the competition. She honestly would've been eliminated during the spider challenge had he not taken the fall. I remember him saying his name was Brick MacArthur but the Bradley part I can believe. He was a big Softie for an army cadet so I always assumed his platoon members nicknamed him "Brick" as some kind of sick joke that he's oblivious to. I'm glad Jo came to her senses and agreed to an alliance instead of feuding with him throughout the show per normal. They could've made a great duo. Nice job!
| Tea-and-Glasses chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
Thank you so much ( some Jock fanfics are so bad its almost like Zoke *shudders*) very good!
| acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
Heh, this is pretty cool.
Keep the good writing.
| newWorld101 chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
omg i loved it this was really good you should do more jock plz