Reviews for brilliance of the sun
kmikaberidze26 chapter 1 . 6/29
wow this was amazing. So neat and well-written.
FCoAL chapter 1 . 6/24
I really like this xD
C.Himedere chapter 1 . 5/20
HOLY SHIT THE FEELS this is the first time i heard of this theory and the plot has already progressed till like what, alvarez? This was so well written and my heart literally broke for sting and lucy and natsu and UGHHHHH my heart hurts
starscriptmage chapter 1 . 4/7
I AM NOW THOROUGHLY ADDICTED TO THIS AU. Seriously, you are such a genius! I loved reading Rogue and Sting's confusion and longing ;A; I really hope the last installment is happy...
LavenderMoonRose chapter 1 . 9/30/2015
whoa... I love this theory- don't you?
the-clumsy-one chapter 1 . 2/1/2015
Where's the rest? :o
rrrrRANDOMmm chapter 1 . 1/22/2015
My goddddd! I cried at the end! It's so sad, why?! *bawls* so sweet and heartbreaking
LeChick chapter 1 . 9/17/2014
The a/n said it all.
This is just too good
Deinokos chapter 1 . 8/1/2014
Do you have any idea how hard I'm sobbing right now? Why? Why do you break my heart so?
Lithosphere chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
TT-TT I CRIED SO MUCH WHEN I READ THIS FANFIC! IT'S SO TOUCHING!
BiblioMatsuri chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
*starts crying again*

Did anyone else cry at Sting and Lector's reunion in canon?

So, where did he think all the originally-normal-human dragonslayer kids came from? (There's a river in Egypt, and he's drowning in it.)
Collaborative Lady chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
Woah. He irrepressibly remembers, and doesn't want to. It's an itch on the brain that catches in the heart. Squirming worms of memory.
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Ew.

You've written each story segment in a slightly different style, all good, but this one is my favorite. Might be because of the emotive context, all of them were heart wrenching, but this one is... more relatable? You have to lend some of your writing license to the character to convey their view of the world but cutting down the description seriously streamlines this into a clear audience-observer scenario. Therefore I think sting is the best, you see?
Or, I dunno. Everything's good.
MoonlightRurouni chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
-once again dead-
Cat Goliath chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww! So sad. I'm surprised he couldn't remember them. Aw, I just want to go in this and yell and hug and cry and argh, so many emotions.
theformulaofpudding chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
*gross sobbing* Can I just say you caught the personalities of everyone perfectly and I just can't.
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