This is a damn fine story. Small nitpicks aside I have been thoroughly entertained & now i must deal with the greatest pain of all... the looming end of a beloved book series. Excellent work.

The twins is not on the way to the wall if you Cross at the Ruby Ford.

The twins isn't even on the king's road.

I love this story. Thanks for writing and sharing it.

I mean, Cersei's probably right that Shae was a spy for Varys. The clues were there. It's a pity Tyrion's so bad at politics or he might have noticed.

Love how you’ve written all the characters but especially mance rayder
He is a good man just trying to save his people and Ned and Jon understand that and realize it’s the time for all the old hatred’s to die and all men stand united against the dead…RIP tormund

A strong ending for part two. I’ll be home sick tomorrow (as I am now) so I look forward to this while I rest

As messaged before continuing to comment. This is so engrossing, there is a lot of back and forth with time but so was there in the book. Intrigued to see where this will go as we know no one is safe in GOT

love what you did here with quaithe and asshai! love your story in general. the one thing i do take issue with is the way you’ve domesticated arya but, well, perhaps that is just a difference in how we see her character. cant wait to read part 3!

Fantastic story teller. Would have paid good money for this novel.

"She is a woman, he is a boy"? Aegon is older than Dany... why did Jorah say that?

Great ending to this chapter.

Wow. If needs must and Tyrion getting his due. And Bronn is the man.

That's some bullshit.

Poor Stannis. The Rodney Dangerfield of Westeros.

Harsh chapter. Hope springs eternal however.