Reviews for Ned Stark Lives! Part 2 |
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![]() ![]() ![]() love what you did here with quaithe and asshai! love your story in general. the one thing i do take issue with is the way you’ve domesticated arya but, well, perhaps that is just a difference in how we see her character. cant wait to read part 3! |
![]() ![]() Fantastic story teller. Would have paid good money for this novel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "She is a woman, he is a boy"? Aegon is older than Dany... why did Jorah say that? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great ending to this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. If needs must and Tyrion getting his due. And Bronn is the man. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's some bullshit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Stannis. The Rodney Dangerfield of Westeros. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harsh chapter. Hope springs eternal however. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was awesome. Arya is awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. I love all things Arya and Gendry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thorne is such an ass. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don't fuck with money. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thorne is cunt. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story but I don’t like Jon’s characterization much. He behaves much like a lost puppy and seems so reliant on his family when in canon he was independent. Obviously Ned living changes everything but still. He also seems pretty pathetic. Every fight he hasn’t had long claw and Robb has had it lol. Furthermore, he somehow manages to destroy the wall as well lmao |