Reviews for Sunshine
Erik51324 chapter 8 . 11/5/2014
Damn, That was a good story.
The grammar was a bit off at some points, but for your first story it was really good.
I'm also in the middle of...Well trying to make a story.
But I don't think my imagination is as good as yours is.
Keep up the good work.
Erik51324 chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
*Flames Anyway! xD
back to what I was going to say.
I like it so far. For a first story its very good, I like the story behind it.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/1/2014
I think that this has a pretty good start, some better grammar than some.
Lady Mewthree chapter 8 . 4/28/2010
Make another one with mewtwo falling in love with a human. That would be cool.
SleepiPanda chapter 8 . 7/3/2009
T.T *sniff* the ending of this chappie is sad
Trilobitemk7 chapter 8 . 9/8/2007
Any chances that there will be a sequel?
AMJZero chapter 4 . 8/11/2007
I've read through the first 4 chapters so far and I have to say, Great Work.
Silver Fang chapter 8 . 6/14/2007
This is such a beautiful, heart-felt story. I've never read a Mewtwo story so wonderfully put together. Please update soon I can't wait to see what will happen between Espeon and Mewtwo!
onedumbblondie chapter 8 . 10/21/2006
That was good!

VERY GOOD!

But i didn't like the ending. It shouldnt have been like that. And on chapter 7 i didnt get that much. But other than that, really good. I hope you make a second!
CodeLyoko chapter 8 . 7/24/2006
Aw the ending was sad. Is there gonna be a sequal?
dani's random fox chapter 8 . 3/22/2006
Really good story! Kinda sad too.
AyameKitsune chapter 8 . 3/5/2006
Sequal please!
WyldClaw chapter 4 . 2/16/2006
I knew it! Mew gave Sunshine the powers of an Espeon for her to evolve so that Mewtwo will love her back!
WiseAbsol chapter 8 . 2/12/2006
Ah...what a bittersweet ending. Overall, I simply love this story! Mewtwo was well in character, and Sunshine was of the type that he could believably love.

As I said, I love it.

I was curious to see just how she disappeared before Giovanni showed up. Though, it was sad. But it left off with a whole feeling.

Perhaps you'll make a sequel with a happier ending. If not though, I'll just leave it up to inferrences.

Well, thank you for the wonderful read! See ya'!

- WiseAbsol
WyldClaw chapter 1 . 2/9/2006
That poor little evee. I think that she will fit in just fine at Mount caina and the Vaporeon clone will make her feel loved
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