|Reviews for Don't Leave Me|
| scaryinternetwitch chapter 34 . 4/7
This is the single most amazing piece of literature I have ever read. I've been binge reading this for almost 12 hours at a time for a week. The way this is written just leaves me...absolutely speechless. So realistic, accurate to the canon and to real life, so involved, and making SENSE of every variable and plot detail and wrapping them all up together in a neat package?
This story has given me so much inspiration as someone who wants to be a writer, both in the way of the story and in the way of that I want to write something this breathtaking in my life. The fact that you've been writing this for three years and keep going shows so much dedication I can't even voice it.
This is my favorite story I've ever read, I know I'm going to reread it time and time again over the years, honestly.
I've favorited and followed this story, and I'm so excited for when you can get the next chapter out! I can't thank you enough for writing something I can connect to so deeply and believe me, I'm definitely a devoted follower now.
| Guest chapter 34 . 2/19
I just reread this after seeing one of your other stories. It is still one of my favorites.
Thank you for writing it.
| feral creature chapter 34 . 11/19/2016
Just finished your story it is awesome and I hope your situation gets better good luck
| telepathylover117 chapter 34 . 10/5/2016
Let me give you just a little bit of inspiration to help you along and continuing the story. When I found this story, I didn't know what to expect and then you have given me one hell of a Joyride. I've been on this story for a week now. I've often stayed up till 3 in the morning just to finish the chapter. This is one of the best and most realistic Invader Zim stories I have ever read. You had my heart quivering and twisting in more ways than I could have ever imagined. I absolutely loved the story and I want it to continue if you need help with inspiration or just to get your ideas typed out let me know and I'll assist I just really want this to continue because it is by far my favorite Invader Zim story ever. I've been trying to figure out what my favorite Invader Zim story would be for a while now. And I know it's definitely this one now. Thank you so much for writing this story I'm really sad that the updates have been so slow I hope 2016 has been a better year for you. I hope this story can continue. It's too wonderful to go unfinished. Thank you again for writing this story, and thank you so much for giving me such a good read I have recommended this story to over a hundred people. I've been obsessing over it all week and it has quite annoyed my friends to the brink of wanted to throw me away. But that's just what happens when I fall in love with something so amazing. So thank you once again for writing this story. I really hope it continues.
| kewllewk chapter 28 . 9/13/2016
I've finally found words for the bits that have been bothering me lately. You're being too repetitive in the relationship scenes. New stuff is definitely happening, but it's outnumbered at least two to one by repeated statements and conversations happening for the nth time. It took me this long to realize it because they're all in places they make some amount of sense, but they really don't need to be there and it's making reading more of a wading game than is comfortable. It certainly doesn't help that you've been using direct addresses in the dialogue every other sentence for as long as your characters have been talking to each other, which is so drastically disproportionate to real conversation that you could reduce it to one tenth the amount and still be above average enough for comment.
| kewllewk chapter 20 . 9/12/2016
You know, every time I see "tunaghost" I can't help but wonder what the hell a tunga is and why she would be hosting it. It's amusing enough that I thought I'd share.
| kewllewk chapter 11 . 9/11/2016
I can understand making Team Razor competent despite the general levels of competency in the setting, because they need to be good to serve their purpose, but I feel like they're just a little too normal for IZ characters. They're logical and good at their jobs, with no major flaws or quirks displayed, which wouldn't even be close to a problem if this were anything but Invader Zim. As it is, they don't really fit in thematically. I know you wrote this literally years ago and probable don't care too much, but I thought I'd give my thoughts.
| Raynor Zeraph chapter 33 . 5/2/2016
sorry about that last comment, my phone must have opened in my pocket. I'm sad to say I finally read all that you have so far, and it's left a space about three hours wide in my day. I mean... I read a lot, regardless of what I have available to read, but since starting this story about a week ago, I simply couldn't stop. amazing. simply amazing. wonderfully lengthy descriptions, characters that have good personalities, and I love your take on zimxgaz. please, please, please give me more! :b
| Raynor Zeraph chapter 29 . 5/1/2016
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| Mureena chapter 34 . 4/23/2016
I gravitate to read this story again and again when I end up in foul mood and it it always helps. I think the count I have read this story is getting near 10 already. Will wait for new stuff forever.
| SonicMario33 chapter 24 . 3/2/2016
"UNICORN FRIENDSHIP POWER IS NO MATCH FOR ZIM!"
I take it Zim isn't a fan of My Little Pony.
| Guest chapter 34 . 2/3/2016
I find this story truly original and satisfying.
| MrSlendy69 chapter 34 . 1/26/2016
You're awesome dude i love your work, just keep doin whatcha do!
| Guest chapter 34 . 1/22/2016
First , I love this story. The extensive character development of all of characters, the romance between zim and gaz and the exstensive detail you put in this story just makes it a glorious masterpiece. Second I'm extremely grateful that despite your hardships you are still working on the story.
Finally I know that you can get through this and I will keep you in my prayers
| somebody to everyone chapter 9 . 1/21/2016
God I love extensive chapters! It'll take months to read this whole thing, but it's so great and sweet and incredibly well-written! I wouldn't want to finish in the end! Thank you for writing this excellent fic! GO DATR!