Reviews for My Name is Pitch Black
Raven chapter 1 . 12/7/2015
Wow that was amazing,if rotg was not PG-13,that would be the sinisterly creepy side of pitch...ummm omg its 3 in morning where i live...why did i read this awesome poem,((hides under blankets))well good night
0kiJ9jio80i9j9 chapter 1 . 5/17/2015
Everything about this was amazing!
Although I don't read poetry as often, I read this and was just blown away by the pacing and plain awesome creepy descriptions you wrote for Pitch. It perfectly reflects his character of- well the Nightmare King obviously- and also that paranoid feeling of something just out the corner of your eye...
Ah, reminds me of all my nights as the victim, getting up in the middle of the night for a trip to the fridge and flying like hell back to my bedroom without dare looking behind me hah XD
Spritefire chapter 1 . 4/12/2015
AHHA! I've got goosebumps... *head snaps up at sound* Does it matter that I'm reading this at night? AH! *burrows under covers* Sometimes it feels like, somebody's WATCHING ME...
FrostedFeathers chapter 1 . 1/14/2015
Wow! Poetry's not usually my thing but that was truly excellent! A brilliantly written piece that gave me goosebumps!

Well Done and Thanks for sharing it with us! :)
gediel chapter 1 . 9/8/2014
beautiful but creepy on so many levels...
but thats the piont aint it?
happycat 98 chapter 1 . 6/25/2014
creepy I "m not turning my light off tonight! this is cool I like how scary you make him sound. It fits the boogeyman.
ColdHeartsAndMinds chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
Amazing. Definately Pitch's sinister side
candle dark chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
best. poem. ever. truly awesome, creepy, and perfect for sleepovers. :D
Gl0wB0t chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
A few nights ago I shut my closet door before going to bed. That night I had a nightmare and when I woke up, the closet door was open.
Tragically Humorous chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
This was beautiful! I was instantly transported to all the times I've run up dark stairs in fear of some creature snatching at my feet. Loved it! Thank you so much for sharing!
Meercatwhisperer112 chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
Brilliant. Just brilliant.
watertribewolfe chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
I liked Pitch in the movie. He seemed the most realistic in his motives. He's just like Jack in wanting to be seen and all. It's just his way of going about that made him appear to be a villain. Still I loved him and his accent! And its good to see someone else who doesn't completely hate Pitch as well. Mostly its all about Jack, who I also like! but seriously, Pitch is my favorite! thanks for writing this chapter!
Turias chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
The entire piece gave me goose bumps when we read it together that night. I could very well see this being published easy. You have so much talent I can't wait to read your next works.
TheRookMaster chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
Ermygosh-ermygosh- I think I nearly fainted there...
Starcee138 chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
I'm not one for poetry but I'm in total love with this
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