|Reviews for A Wrinkle in Time|
| Maxine chapter 11 . 10/7
Ahem... Ahh... Author-san, is this still in progress?
Just making sure, because a bunch of the awesome fics I've read never saw their ends appropriately.
I do hope, it still is being continued, because it IS awesome, and I'd like to see what the actual hell happened during the invasion.
| Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 11 . 9/30
| LDKlove chapter 11 . 9/17
I love this book and I REALLY hope you continue it.
| Haru chapter 11 . 9/13
ahhh this is definitely one of the best time travel fics here! I love everything u wrote so far. Wishing you would update this somehow in near for sharing this fic with us! xxxx
| namlooss chapter 11 . 9/12
Re-reading cause feels
| Raven Murphy chapter 11 . 9/7
Are you sure about that? It's been around four years since you last updated
| Guest chapter 11 . 9/4
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/29
this is an amazing story and I hope you start up this story again.
| Discordmaru chapter 11 . 8/24
This is great. I wish it was finished. But what is written is worth reading.
| Aetheriol chapter 11 . 8/23
Too bad this hasn't been updated in a long time, but I really enjoyed this story!
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/17
Please finish this 3
| dezmonthemoonbear chapter 11 . 8/10
That's funny, you haven't updated in three years . . .
Ps. I always come back and re-read this story and just so you know it never gets old.
Pss. This is a good-no the best example of a naruto time travel fic and I will miss this one the most.
Pass. You will probably never read this message anyway . . .
| stylo1 chapter 1 . 7/30
it is to introspective which makes you waste to much words on back and forth ending up in a story spanning 2 months.
rhe whole keeping secrets was just stupid. the enemy will react to you and give orders without any explanations needed, they on rhe other hand are just three 12 year olds. the whole enemy grows stronger while only 3nof them do. if they came clean witht the hokage and made a plan things would have been way different. danzo could be killed right away, orochimaru could be killed in the 2nd parr of chunin exams. etc etc
story is abandoned 124k words for 2 months, hardly any progress but for dancing around the truth, in the end not really worth reading. nice try though
| stylo1 chapter 4 . 7/30
the constant use of japanese gets old real quick. and for the life of me i dont understand all this secretcy, what do they think will happen when they kick orochimaru's ass, understanding? acceptance in the heat of battle? no thats recipy for disaster
| bananahead1 chapter 1 . 7/28
sasuke is as powerful as naruto