Aww This is adorable! I never thought of Heath/Angela before, but you wrote it very well~

That was so sweet I think I got a cavity. xD

Very Cute,

Hmm better title, let me think. I find it's best to name a story after an item or concept unique to the story. It also helps to figure the title into a charecters lines sometimes. We could do it in reverse, someting like taking the line “Now, now, priest, didn’t anyone ever tell you it’s rude to stare?” and call the story Now, Now, Priest, Don't Stare or someting like that. Just an idea, its realy late or really early depending on how you look at it so I don't know if it's a good idea or not. Creating titles is so much easier on longer stories. But I like to help out when I can. So I tried. Im a little suprised more people haven't givein you more ideas, since you asked and all. Well

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Greg

Aww ... cute story! I can see it happening. Id love to see later chapters, to see how this developps.

That was SOOOOO cute! UPDATE! NOW! it is SUCH a good story!

it's so CUTE! i LOVE it!

That was cute and "fluffy"! Aww... it was the innocent kind of romance. I liked it! Raye-chan, you never disappoint me with your stories or poems.

YOu better write a sequel. I love Carlie! Shes so cute!

Wow! Heath/Angela goes so well together! I can see it happening...anyway, great fic! I really hope to see one in the near future! _

that was... cute XD! ahh, really cute o and heath and angie are nearly the same age.. somehow that would fit XD thanks, that you're so fast in writing o i loved reading it _

"When you’ll grow up, I’ll tell you. Giggle"

*ggg* that was cool o! i'm looking forward to your next fics .!